March 6, 2012, 4:56 pm
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Avatars & Skin
Avatar Skin
TF Goddess Avata -tgm-Arna~Wink by
TheAvatar
by
Head & Face
Hair Eyebrows Eyes Head
.m. Urban Irides * Thin Arched Ey n: green tea (F) [n77] Model Head by
Clothes
Top Bottom Shoes
$ crooked teeth. $DB High Waist D |DF|Grud Boots by
Accessories
Dainty Hands Earrings Bracelets
dainty hands ~bl *x* Black Clips LIZ-Fallen brace by
March 7, 2012, 4:18 am
The look overall is nice. The head throws it off for me. I don't care for the mouth area. I'm tired of seeing these boots on submissions now. I see where you were going on this and I like it. Try a softer expression on a new head maybe. Welcome to the group. Very glad to have you.
B
B
March 7, 2012, 10:15 am
As per the new rule for resubs, this outfit will be granted a resub as the theme contest was created -before- the new rule. Please wait until after today (Wednesday) to submit a resub, as most of the judges will reply by wednesday.
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Thanks.
March 8, 2012, 2:45 pm
This look is very lovely.
I do like the boots with this look though, they're just a little too common and we don't want a lot of looks with the same boots.
I do recommend these two as possible alternatives.
The overall outfit is nice, I like the use of the shirt and high-waist shorts.
I also agree with Devia when it comes to the head. An alternative head could look nicer, especially with the lips.
I recommend adding maybe an eyeshadow accessory by nutsbar to your outfit, give to give the face a little more 'oomph'
The hair is lovely and you should defiantly keep it.
Instead of black nails, maybe go for a little more natural french tip.
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Rating: B+
I do like the boots with this look though, they're just a little too common and we don't want a lot of looks with the same boots.
I do recommend these two as possible alternatives.
The overall outfit is nice, I like the use of the shirt and high-waist shorts.
I also agree with Devia when it comes to the head. An alternative head could look nicer, especially with the lips.
I recommend adding maybe an eyeshadow accessory by nutsbar to your outfit, give to give the face a little more 'oomph'
The hair is lovely and you should defiantly keep it.
Instead of black nails, maybe go for a little more natural french tip.
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Rating: B+
March 8, 2012, 3:40 pm
This is another casual outfit i would go for.
The Hair is very simple.
The Skin is alright together with the light makeup.
The eyes are great. The eyebrow--I'd recomment natural brows by 49cnt
The Top and Boots matches perfectly--although it looks a little boyish..Another Boots I'd recommend are the loosened laces types of boots and/or the ones Judge Inky recommended as I have them myself. c:
The Shorts are perfectly fine, not too short for a short.
The Bracelet for accessory is fine by me.
And yea hand resizer is a must-have now. ;D
Rate: B+
The Hair is very simple.
The Skin is alright together with the light makeup.
The eyes are great. The eyebrow--I'd recomment natural brows by 49cnt
The Top and Boots matches perfectly--although it looks a little boyish..Another Boots I'd recommend are the loosened laces types of boots and/or the ones Judge Inky recommended as I have them myself. c:
The Shorts are perfectly fine, not too short for a short.
The Bracelet for accessory is fine by me.
And yea hand resizer is a must-have now. ;D
Rate: B+
March 8, 2012, 4:28 pm
I Agree with Inky Cause those are clean jean shorts and i dont think it would go good with the boots try one of the shoes she picked out But im gonna say if you gonna go with one of those shoes try a different shirt Its not a bad look but Try something ripped with those boots
I give it a C+
I give it a C+
March 8, 2012, 5:18 pm
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Description: I tired listening to all of your suggestions and changing some things. Hope it improved.
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
Top
Accessories
Dainty Hands
March 9, 2012, 11:21 am
Love the shorts.
Looks better with the new shoes.
Not too crazy about the shirt but its alright. It goes together well.
A
Looks better with the new shoes.
Not too crazy about the shirt but its alright. It goes together well.
A
March 9, 2012, 11:08 pm
I agree the new shoes add a lot, the black and brown go good with the hair. This new head is better than the old, but still has that unique factor that makes her look a tad different. I like how they eyes are very defined but don't have excessive eye makeup.
Bracelets a little bulky and a bit unfitting.
Overall I give this an A-
Bracelets a little bulky and a bit unfitting.
Overall I give this an A-
March 11, 2012, 4:47 pm
Much better. I like how it refined it but kept your original idea intact.
A-
A-
March 11, 2012, 6:26 pm
Less boyish now..a little bit more accessories next time perhaps.. c:
A-
A-
