EDIT: No gloves, new face, new makeup... if you don't like this face.. suggestions are welcome.


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TF Vogue Avatar -tgm-Bar V2(Lash
byTheAvatarbythegangst
831477

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[c] Hair: Gigann[L] DarkBrown Th[M] Innocence Bo-E- Kreayshawn H
byCALbyLillyButterflbyMissMayabyLoso
606499499883

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[c] Kyo Outfit: [K]Sexy Blk Boot
byCALbyPRlMA
578664

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RingsEarringsGlovesBraceletsEyeLashesHeadbands

Pearl RingDainty Earring D(FG) LaLa Lush W[c] Sallysue Bra[M] Stardust MakRose Headband Bl
bykiddynekobyXSinfullXbyShellbbyCALbyMissMayabyItsPureEvil
527395535495666499

I love the fit everything goes well even the flowy hair I like how you posed. Made it seem like you were actually gitting hit by wind. Very fun and interjetic! A+

The shirt is very preppy-ish. I like the colors and how nice the textures are on it.
I don't like thebottoms/leggings.
I feel like they stand out from the outfit and not in a good way.
But seeing as they're a one-piece combo, not much can be done.

The gloves I'm also not feeling.
I suggest removing them and leaving the hands bare.

The shoes I'm not exactly sure on at the moment because of the leggings.
Possibly some red pumps could add a little pop instead of having the waist-down black and unexciting.

I do suggest a different head, the one you chose gives the effect of the face being squished together and it's not flattering with this skin.

The makeup addition is a nice touch along with the flower headband though.

The hair is beautiful and flows with the outfit.
It also doesn't have any problems with the headband, so that's a plus.

Rating; B-

Agree on the pants but the rest of the fit looks so adorable. I would only change the head and drop the gloves.
B

Overall I feel this outfit is pretty unique and fresh as it doesn't feature any of the carlysharp clothing we all seen lately. I liked the top, makeup, and hair a lot.

I also like the head unlike most of the girls because I feel like it makes her look a little less like all the other girls; but at the same token perhaps going with what the crowd finds most pleasuring may be the best way to get into Sedulity.

I have to agree with the pants and gloves being a little off.

Overall I give this a B+

I feel as if the pants and head were fixed that the ratings may be high enough to actually make or break the outfit.
Please make a re submission with everything considered.

I will get to it tonight after I get my car fixed!

I'm going to have a hard time picking a new head, I'm very picky about what I like.

I was also thinking a little darker red lip, I will show you and if you prefer the original I will switch it back. :]

Submitted edits.

Please submit resubs in the thread and not edit the original post, now we have no record of what you originally posted so we dont have a keen sense of what exactly was changed and what we liked more.

I will let this slide as this was your first mistake but please read

[www.imvu.com]

"You are not allowed to edit the original outfit once someone replies."

and I think somewhere else I went over how to submit resubs as a reply, not as an edit change.

I like this one. All seem well blending from head to heels. Although i'd sugges to look for a better eyebrow next time.

Rate: B+

I feel as if there was no effort in styling this outfit. Everything is very predictable and a bit boring for my taste. The skin seemed a bit much as well.

Overall Grade: C

I still give resub B+

Here's the original by the way.


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TF Vogue Avatar -tgm- Misa~pin u
byTheAvatarbythegangst
831444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

[c] Hair: Gigann[L] DarkBrown Th[M] Innocence Bo[n77] Cute Head 
byCALbyLillyButterflbyMissMayabynikka77
606499499883

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TopShoes

[c] Kyo Outfit: [K]Sexy Blk Boot
byCALbyPRlMA
578664

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RingsEarringsGlovesBraceletsEyeLashesHeadbands

Pearl RingDainty Earring D[c] Solace Glove[c] Sallysue Bra[M] Stardust MakRose Headband Bl
bykiddynekobyXSinfullXbyCALbyCALbyMissMayabyItsPureEvil
527395571495666499

Still a

B+

3 out of 5 judges have voted, the average was 83.5 % ( B )