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TF Model Linda 2n: hakata angel 
byTheModelFbynutsbar
1031774

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

!b SIMPSON 3 Blo[mm]Natural Blons| Myst Eyes {On!b Ashlee Head
byBetsybymiamewbyScarlingbyBetsy
661554664730

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f! floral top.[+] Rolled Navy 5. Tan Leather~ 
byFaultbySephbyScarlett
600590650

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EyeLashesNecklaces!!Music!!

[SIN] SeDuCt!Ve m// Nutcracker ~[+] Vintage Came
bySinderellbyMinoubySeph
746597650

Nice to see some developer names not used much here. I would just suggest maybe a less baggy looking rolled up short, and always a hand minimizer like LOL or Mik make. This is a fresh, cute look.
As is right now, a B+.
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Thank you!!

Welcome to Sedu. I can see a casual spring outfit on this one. The windblown open hair is fresh. The Skintone and makeup is great for this kind of theme. Though the eyes could be alil bluer or moss green color since shes blond. For the outfit, yes it is indeed an adorable one with a vintage cam.Although the shorts are mostly used on here its still favorable. The flats are great. Flat sandals with flowers would also be cool too. A summer hat would be a plus. Or honey shaded rayban or aviator. Please please use LOL's hand resizer^^ Goodluck on the next.

Rate: A-

This is decent, I like the overall feel. Not sure about the camera but its something new. I'd also like to see a hand resizer.

B+

You are granted a resub.

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Description: Added new shorts, new eyes, and glasses. ^_^









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TF Model Linda 2n: hakata angel 
byTheModelFbynutsbar
1031774

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

!b SIMPSON 3 Blo[mm]Natural Blonn: LAKE HILL EYE!b Ashlee Head
byBetsybymiamewbynutsbarbyBetsy
661554550730

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TopBottomShoes

f! floral top.[+] High Navy Sh5. Tan Leather~ 
byFaultbySephbyScarlett
600565650

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EyeLashesNecklacesWayfers Glasse!!Music!!New Acces.

[SIN] SeDuCt!Ve m// Nutcracker ~5pr*Clubmaster F[+] Vintage CameICO Dainty Hand 
bySinderellbyMinoubyShadesbySephbyLOL
746597865650550

This is an improvement in terms of shorts and the added hand resizer is a plus. The glasses I feel by themselves would have neither added nor taken away from the outfit but they bring attention to the eyes, which you now have very unrealistic eyes IMO. So there is both good and bad in this resub, so I stay with my original rating of

B+

I would give this an

A

The new shorts on the original submission would be an A for me.

3 out of 5 judges have voted, the average was 92.33 % ( A- )