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Description: Provocative outfit entry. This outfit was inspired by a darker side of being provocative without going into really dark/goth type inspired fashion. I really think red is the most sexy color, so I tried to use it a lot in this outfit. The taller avi was selected just because of the difference in the way it looked compared to with my smaller avi. I think it looks better.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

*VN Lush Federat-tgm-Just Red
byVisNovabythegangst
2533499

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HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Kimbra red and b[*L] Brows: Fae t| Amaris: hyrda[E]*Lush Lips*
byTheJagerbyLuminabyzeloticbyEpicErin
773417444692

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[Night] Emily ch[Night] Polly sh
byNightbyNight
686774

Accessories

BraceletsDainty HandsEyeLashesEyeLashesNew Acces.Earrings

Red and Black Brsmall hands+blac!RN! Thick Lashen: white line anICO Dainty Hand Black/Red Earrin
byAnasRabiebylavabyRevesNoirbynutsbarbyLOLbyCelyng
481571620682550550

I like the dress and shoes. I don't like the hairstyle. A different style and color would be better with this outfit. I also suggest maybe adding a ring and some earrings.

B+

The outfit colours really match and I like the idea, but I agree the hair can be much better, I also think more realistic eyes would help the look. Some earrings or a ring would work too,

B+

Agree with Norrona.

B+

I knew this would get a 89% so improved and resubmitted. Thanks everyone ^.^

German Wrote:
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> I knew this would get a 89% so improved and
> resubmitted. Thanks everyone ^.^


Resubmissions need to be approved by me, and they should be posted as a reply to the original and not as a new topic. This is to have comparison on what changed and also to cause less clutter from more posts.

B+
88.33 %

3 out of 4 judges have voted, the average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

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Description: Alrighty, So I took all the suggestions into take. I knew this outfit would get a 89% due to all B+'s. So resubmitting xP with improvements.

-Changed eyes
-Changed hair style
-Changed hair color
-Added some things to spice it up
-Toned down lashes

Hope this is better!

Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

*VN Lush Federat-tgm-Just Red
byVisNovabythegangst
2533499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

✄ Breonna Blac[*L] Brows: Fae [iAW]Moon Glory [E]*Lush Lips*
byNevoirbyLuminabyAkobyEpicErin
634417477692

Clothes

TopShoes

[Night] Emily ch[Night] Polly sh
byNightbyNight
686774

Accessories

BraceletsDainty HandsEarringsEyeLashesHeaddressesNew Acces.

Red and Black Brsmall hands+blac[Feather] Black/II~ AZN-Lash Vol[ack] Red Black ICO Dainty Hand 
byAnasRabiebylavabyAlaryniabyCapsulebyllACKllbyLOL
481571750692867550

I took the liberty of giving it a proper resub and deleted the new post you made.

This outfit seems totally different, in a good way. I don't think the hair feathers were necessary but they are cute and add to the outfit. Good job!

A

She looks better; I agree the hair feathers were not necessary but they dont look bad. I find the new head a little bit small according to the avi proportions and not much provocative to me, I think her eyebrows should be a little bit darker. Anyways I prefer this one.

A-

I like this hair and it makes her skin look better too.

A-

A-
92.78 %

3 out of 4 judges have voted, the average was 92.78 % ( A- )