October 31, 2012, 11:55 am

It would be interesting that you read what we said in your previous submissions so you can make better looks fixing the things we have mentioned. You always use same accesories, you should look for different ones, that would help a lot. Proportions are horrible here, I dont think the hairstyle works and the head looks too small, I dont like the red lipstick. This skin bores me and I dont find a wow factor, I dont find this look attractive.

B-


October 31, 2012, 12:11 pm

Well i did take into consideration what you guys said about my previous submissions. I found a different head and i looked for a different skin , but didnt find any that i liked. I also tried using different avi's. Im sorry that you dont like it :/ but ill keep trying until i create something that you guys like.





October 31, 2012, 12:26 pm

Sure thats the idea of making better avis, noone is perfect and we all are here to learn and understand different points of view. I think tall and not giga avis would help a lot your proportions and try different accesories, also different stuff (head, skin, eyes, etc) from other devs.





October 31, 2012, 2:31 pm

I definitely agree with everything Safaroba said. Proportions are all wrong

B-


October 31, 2012, 3:32 pm


Be careful with giga avatars, I personally don't encourage them. Giga avatars make your head look way too small for your avatar. The skin looks weird and your hands look really skinny.

C


October 31, 2012, 7:33 pm

Agree, i dont like giga avis, at all
the outfit concept was cute tho
B


November 1, 2012, 3:50 am

http://www.imvuoutfits.com/hpv/images/declined.png

B-
80.46 %

3 out of 5 judges have voted, the average was 79.44 % ( C+ )

Note: 1 pro member review was taken into account.
Their review was 85 % ( B ) and rendered the final overall average to 80.46 % ( B- )