December 2, 2012, 8:38 pm

I like this idea. The first thing i see is all the makeup, she needs a more child skin. Also a more childish hairdo. I like the outfit its cute but i'd like to see different shoes because I dont feel the rain boots go with it.

B+


December 3, 2012, 6:40 am

The skin is too adult-like for the child avatar as the make up is a bit too harsh for a child. Change it for something softer and cleaner for a better result. The hair makes the outfit more business-like than child-like, so try to replace the current hair for something more playful so that the outfit goes more towards child than it goes towards formal and business. (The jacket is the component that can alter a feeling of an outfit like this when a certain hairstyle is combined)


B+


December 3, 2012, 3:56 pm

Agree with Phersu 100% on this.

B+


December 3, 2012, 4:36 pm

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88.33 %

3 judges have voted, the average was 88.33 % ( B+ )