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Description: 2013's Summer Trends










Avatars & Skin

Skin

A|  Cameron  Mod
byAmire
553

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

!G! FADE AFRODetailed Black E !! Adios EyesKANYE HEAD V2
byGiGiby49cntbyZeibyKanye
4435154981043

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

.::.Crisp White |Long Shorts Pan|Z| Original Van
byCONceptzbyGiantsbyZER0
602609608

Accessories

WatchesAnyglasses!ActionsGlovesNew Acces.Bracelets

"PBS" Diamond Wa|no2| Ray.Bans YPerfect Giga AvaPerfect Hands♔ Dior Duffle ※Gold Braclet 
byK0NTR0LjRbyBallerbyCihanbyJamesShulerbyPowersbyLethal
842656990466680700

He needs a shorter avatar. The giga stretches him out wayyyy to much and it's not very good looking. I would change the head, it's too small for his size, and neck; as well as being too thin in width. I'd take the bag off, it's not really necessary. Some different accessories would help him out as well, the gold is too bright and off for the white and khanki. I don't like how the top makes the top of his body really long, and his shorts give him a stumpy bottom half; it's way out of proportion. Make sure you check proportions of the avatar and clothing, so it doesn't look bad. Great try though.

B

56 said it all.

B.

I disagree with 56 on the "not very good looking" part, but everything else he's right. Mostly just try not to use giga avatars when submitting on Sedulity because they aren't favorable.

B+

From A Far Your Skin Looks SUPER FADED.
 And This Doesn't Look Like 2013 Trends At All.. It
 Just Looks Like A Dude In A While T-Shirt With 
Pants And A Bag

B-

Nothing special with this outfit. It is too common and the giga avatar is just a BIG NONO, because it stretches out everything and the shorts makes things awkward too. I agree with everything 563 has said too.


B-

B
84.52 %

4 judges have voted, the average was 85 % ( B )

Note: 1 pro member review was taken into account.
Their review was 81.67 % ( B- ) and rendered the final overall average to 84.52 % ( B )