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Avatars & Skin

Skin

Red Rum 02
byistrawber
579

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

RS*Berit*Chai[LL] Subtle SkyYuric Cute Teen
byRapSynbyLauraLight16byRissaYuri
564554988

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

-Z- {Crew} Cloud!NA White Shorts(L) White Short 
byZRAIRbyNawtyAngelbylisnevash
586675675

Accessories

ScarvesActionsNecklacesEyeLashesFacial Jewelry

B/C Cute Scarf~GIGA GIRLY~[W] Long necklac!S_CuTe EyelasheSUmmer Rose Blus
byZackoreebyLadyFame0bywiiingbyS0lbyiGlossBos
4491188735565552

Hey-yah!

This is way better then the first post you posted on Sedulity.
Even though this one looks better. Its still not really good.
If you used a smaller avatar it would have looked better!

I rate this an B.
Would like a resub!

Agreed and a different skin and head would be muuuch better. Don't forget hand resizers as well and that long necklace isn't needed here. Otherwise, great try!

B

B
85 %

2 of the required 3 judges have voted with an average of 85 % ( B ).

Note: Although 3 judges are required for decision, if 1 more judge gave this a relatively high grade of A-, it will still only have 87.22 %.
There is no way this outfit could have met the required 90% to be approved.