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Avatars & Skin

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Venus [Tall](m)Brave Bird TA
bySinderellbymikki87
8000499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

F| Avril 28 Brow~DD Real Thin BrXO. CHI GreenishM/F Head Enhance(Aless)Maggie He
byFinebyDorybyPAPAxobyMara2oXllbyAlessandr
628450664590553

Clothes

TopShoes

~D~ Pirate MaideBlack Pirate Boo
byDelurebyTaurasBabyLov
692694

Accessories

NecklacesMedieval WeapoHatsEyeLashesEyeLashesEyeLashes

Pirate Necklace ICO Pirate CutlaLu* Ahoy Hatn: Christabell lHeart EyePatch ~BC-MAXFACTOR-EYE
bymspaydaybyLOLbyLuridbynutsbarbyC4NDYACIDbyGorgeousK
730550747678650554

ActionsNails MulticolEarrings

Hand Scaler 75%$ Meant to be toScull Earrings
byScalerbyMissCbyHellTwist
399635675

This is great but I wish the head was more mature and a rugged expression too. A different skin since I don't think a female pirate would go to a lot of trouble with makeup. The hair I'd change as well, it goes through the hat and I would've tried to find another hair. Less eye makeup too would be great.

B+

563097 Wrote:
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> This is great but I wish the head was more mature
> and a rugged expression too. A different skin
> since I don't think a female pirate would go to a
> lot of trouble with makeup. The hair I'd change as
> well, it goes through the hat and I would've tried
> to find another hair. Less eye makeup too would be
> great.
>
> B+

I don't think a female pirate would go to a lot of trouble with makeup. - I was thinking about that, but I tried to make/to create a pirate in my own vision, but thank you for advice. -

This is cute! I think she needs a different hair that doesnt clip and also the hearts I really dont see going well with the look. and the eye patch is like shiny leatherish and I think a more duller eyepatch would look better.
Other than that love this
B+

I think she needs to remove the hearts on her cheek, why does she even have them as a pirate? I would expect some scars more than the hearts because as a female pirate you got to be as tough as the male pirate.


I agree about changing the hair to something non clipping, but I feel that the outfit and the hat lacks in quality.


The eye patch texture is more PVC than pirate, and something more leather-like black eye patch would work much better.

Remember to match the eyebrows to the hair colour, they are a little too light.


B+

You should start using the description to tell us what you're trying to convey through your outfits, that way we can help you with your vision. I dont really like the quality of the hat and I agree on the eye patch, a leather one would in fact be better suited. The earrings and necklace dont really match the old and rugged look of the clothing..
B

B+
87,59 %

2 of the required 3 judges have voted with an average of 88,33 % ( B+ ).

Note: 1 member and 1 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 86,11 % ( B ) and rendered the final overall average to 87,59 % ( B+ )

Although 3 judges are required for decision, if 1 more judge gave this a relatively high grade of A, it will still only have 89,44 %.
There is no way this outfit could have met the required 90% to be approved.