Outfit Items: View
Description: Heeey ^^

Black Runway !
(Im aware of the duplicate, yet it has nothing similar to this whole look.)

Hope you like it





Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Luna Avatar [Tal-L- Crying Tale
bySinderellbyLeArtistes
8000609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Black Gaga !!!**[S] No Eyebt| Nahbelius: hoB!tchie Beauty H
byTaintedVibysynamonnbyzeloticbyPoisonouz
617345444609

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottomShoes

[*L] SlasherII |V' +Lay Skirt Be[Night] Decay bo
byLuminabyVkeibyNight
7191200664

Accessories

GlovesNecklacesActionsEyeLashesBraceletsEarrings

m> Vinyl Gloves EV OnyX 1920's NHand Scaler 75%*Sensual|Liner+L[Night] Decay ar[Anry] Trish Ear
byMarthabyEVbyScalerbyJesika767byNightbyAnry
585583399749718663

Rings

!S Vintage Pearl
bySinfully
664

The main part of your outfit is duplicated unfortunately so it brings the grade down some. I wish you had used a necklace that didn't clip with the neck like this one does. I wish she had a different expression on her face as well, this one doesn't really fit the outfit very well.

B+

Remove the necklace because it clips through the neck.

I also would recommend an other skin because the lips do not match the head, making her lip make up so painted on as a circle.

B+

I disagree on the face. I love it! The duplicate isn't an issue for me since it's only one. Nice job!

A

The duplicate doesn't bother me at all seeing as it is completely different, and actually to be honest I'm not even sure how it was passed in the fist place.... Downgrade from the tall avatar to the regular one and you wont have the clipping issues with the necklace, but if you are fond of the tallness just see if you can find a similar necklace that doesn't clip I'm not really sure how I feel about the skirt or head, but I really love what you're going for!
B+

I somehow dont like this outfit.
The head doesnt match the skin and her face looks mad.
But the clothing is decent tho.
Like the Geisha look.

B+

B+
88,89 %

3 judges have voted, the average was 88,33 % ( B+ )

Note: 1 member and 1 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 90,55 % ( A- ) and rendered the final overall average to 88,89 % ( B+ )

Resub Granted

Outfit Items: View
Description: Heeey ^^

Ok, so for this resub I changed the head, skin and Avatar to a regular one so it would not clip the necklace. I also tried to find another bodysuit but non would look as good as this one.

Hope you like it






Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Luna Avatar-tgm-Aira~Cyberm
bySinderellbythegangst
8000477

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Black Gaga pencil blackt| Nahbelius: hoGossip Head Med
byTaintedVibyenjoobyzeloticbyPoisonouz
617391444553

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottomShoes

[*L] SlasherII |V' +Lay Skirt Be[Night] Decay bo
byLuminabyVkeibyNight
7191200664

Accessories

GlovesNecklacesActionsEyeLashesBraceletsEarrings

m> Vinyl Gloves EV OnyX 1920's NHand Scaler 75%*Sensual|Liner+L[Night] Decay ar[Anry] Trish Ear
byMarthabyEVbyScalerbyJesika767byNightbyAnry
585583399749718663

Rings

!S Vintage Pearl
bySinfully
664

Hope everything is okay

P.S. I tried staying similar with the skin without being over the top like the other one

-double click ooops-

A-

Mismatched jewellery?

A-

A

A-