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Avatars & Skin

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TF Keeley Avatar-tgm-Claire(Lash
byTheCelebrbythegangst
831477

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Ashy Elisa[mm] Thick Brown!A | pewds / eye!b Nocturnal Hea
byLeebymiamewbyawkwardbyBetsy
650554444498

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Morning SunshineLexi| lil Black :F: Fllawless Ch
byHellabyJaeebyFllawless
692454719

Accessories

Beauty MarksEyeLashesDainty Hands!!Music!!ActionsBracelets

!R Monroe BeautyRi! Les Azn Eyel!E Short nails [C! Clips PearlHand Scaler 80%[S] Sandy.Bracal
byRiyahbyritshukabyEllenbyKailbyScalerbySeniha88
685675560675399625

A... love it, i dont see anything wrong!

Agree with Laney, maybe a necklace would of been nice to add, but overall it's a cute look.
A

Agreed ^ A

Im not such a fan of this look. There are somethings that bother me.
The hairstyle is not the best for this look since it does not fit the head properly, the top is a little roughly textured and the heels have no texture at all.
Overall good job, it still could be more perfected

B+

A necklace would make this much nicer and i do agree a new hairstyle should be used here.
A-

Honestly, I was not planning on putting more jewelry in as I already had earrings and a bracelet. You can accessorize without overdoing it. I felt a necklace would have overdone it. Daniel and O, you both felt a new hairstyle was necessary. This is such a casual look, it does not need a complicated hairstyle. A simple down-do, or a simple updo would both have worked. I just chose a simple down do. I would have loved a suggestion on what type of style of hair you'd recommend. Also, the shoes- The jacket is such a plain texture as well, so the shoes do not need a pattern anything of the sort. It would ruin the look for me. I wish you would input more suggestions, so I can see where you are coming from. Thanks

I was not refering to patterns, I was refering to the texture of the products. And that is the Graphic detail in the product itself. As you said this is a casual look I can see that and the problem here, in the hair, is not how you styled it but how it fits you. I can see that the hair doesnt fit properly your head. I would suggest using a more volumous hair or either tied hair that fits the head. I hope I cleared more my critique for you

I understand now. Thank you so much.

B+

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A-
91.43 %

4 judges have voted, the average was 90.83 % ( A- )

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 95 % ( A ) and rendered the final overall average to 91.43 % ( A- )

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