May 25, 2013, 5:55 am
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Description: Pin-Up; Bomb girl out celebrating the return of the countries finest !
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
Naima
Head & Face
Hair
Clothes
Top
Accessories
Rings
May 25, 2013, 7:50 am
I agreed with both of the comments above. I honestly suck in looking for the proportion of head and body, but this is obvious, her head is smaller and make her body looks huge. Perhaps changes other head? I would like to suggest, maybe other hair with red/ white bow is looking nice than this bandana, it just not get along well Hun.. Eventhough the color are bright and capture my eyes, but there is nothing stands out in here, she still looks plain, maybe adding something like~ tatoo or like Truly suggested, necklace or earrings? And the ring just not fit in.. e.e Or I would like to suggest, since you're using pearl on the bracelet, why not give it a flow to the rest, this outfit has potential and I love your ideas as well. B+
May 25, 2013, 9:52 am
B+
May 25, 2013, 10:04 am
The head doesn't fit the neck well, at all. The head is also too small for the body. When using updo's, you want to use a head that fits as best as possible, since you can't conceal it as well as you could with a down do. I also feel like the face is really squinty. The black bandanna in the hair, clashes with the hair itself, and it doesn't really go with the red and white theme you have going on here. The top's whiteness does not match the skirt's whiteness, and it looks odd. The top doesn't go well with the type of bottoms you have, since the top is pinup, and the type of skirt you have on is too classy for a top like that. I'd also suggest finding things that have a bit better texture since the bottoms are honestly not that great. I'd also stray away from using props for the photos, as it's distracting from the outfit when judging, and also, if you're using a still avi, please use the pose it comes with it instead of adding a pose pack just for photos. I do agree about the ring not having to do with the outfit. Also, I feel like a simple pearl bracelet would have done better than the one that you have, because it does take my eyes off the outfit, and you want to use accessories that highlight the outfit, without it being overpowering, and I feel like it kinda takes over. I really do love the top, and I love the red lips on the skin, and I'd like to see the outfit better developed.
I'd like to see a resub, since this outfit does have great potential!
B
I'd like to see a resub, since this outfit does have great potential!
B
May 25, 2013, 10:40 am
Yeah I hate to be picky but I have to agree with all of the above! It has potential and I adore the skin!
I also agree we need pics of the still avi. And I agree about the skirt. Creative idea !
B+
I also agree we need pics of the still avi. And I agree about the skirt. Creative idea !
B+
May 25, 2013, 11:13 am
I disagree with a lot of comments here. I think everything looks great together but her head has to be changed. It's way too small or needs a resizer to make it bigger. Other than that, very nice job.
A-
A-
May 25, 2013, 11:57 am
Psh Curvy is still beautiful. :3
I just dislike the head lol
A- Nice work doll.
I just dislike the head lol
A- Nice work doll.
May 26, 2013, 2:20 pm
B+
88.49 %
5 judges have voted, the average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Note: 2 member and 2 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 88.89 % ( B+ ) and rendered the final overall average to 88.49 % ( B+ )