June 4, 2013, 5:43 am

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
Skin
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Luna Avatar [Tal
Unbreakable ~Tat
! Skin. Elysia V
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Sinderell
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LEATHERK1
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Lee
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyebrows
Eyes
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Òâ¢Iggy Duo
Au naturel Eyebr
~D~ No Eyebrows
[M] Gracious Bro
$MS$ Beyonce Hea
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MrsKitty
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513michelle
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Delure
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MissMaya
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MzSweetniss
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Clothes
TopShoes
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[56] Bejeweled |
(D)Dyvine-Black
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563097
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DanyM0stW
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Accessories
EarringsEyeLashes
EyeLashes
Actions
Gloves
Facial Jewelry
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SLN BOWS EARRING
n: swan white sh
Xtreme Lashes!
Hand Scaler 75%
Perfect Hand Sca
Nose Piercing St
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SELEN
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nutsbar
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Desireabl
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Scaler
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ZaraKaine
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Piercing
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Bracelets
Dainty Hands
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gowns diamond br
Rich enough - Na
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gowns
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Lovers
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June 4, 2013, 9:58 am
The head and skin is not flattering the dress or the hair style. The size of the head makes her hairstyle look like it hasn't got any volume at all. Nothing else in the outfit is red, so you could maybe have changed skin tone and added a head scaler if you really liked the head. I also feel that the heels and the colour is too random, same as the red colouring in the outfit. Try to match colours better.
B+
B+
June 4, 2013, 11:20 am
The head is too big here. Try using a smaller head so she doesn't look like a Bratz doll or a bobble head. Always make sure the head is proportionate to the rest of the body and shoulders. I like the shoes here as the black compliments the teal here. The piercing isn't needed here as it's doesn't fit with the outfit. Also, the skintone and lip color doesn't compliment the face very well. I would have gone with maybe a nude lip. Other than those points, you're doing better but keep working at it.
B
B
June 6, 2013, 9:19 pm

B+
87.62 %
3 judges have voted, the average was 86.11 % ( B )
Note: 1 member and 2 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 90.33 % ( A- ) and rendered the final overall average to 87.62 % ( B+ )