June 13, 2013, 2:14 am

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Description: I supposed to make her wearing a very long black gown, but I found the gown have one duplicate, so I decided to have a look at the catalogue for more black gown, then finally I fall in love with this dress e.e Hope you guises like it, thank you for the advance critiques, Im not sure how to describe this theme, might be lolita goth? e.e Idk.. Im suck when it comes to theme xD
Avatars & Skin
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TF Venus Avatar
{vi} Rabbit Pale
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TheAvatar
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Vi
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Head & Face
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Head
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¬Rihanna 18 App
LiiN No Brows (F
⯠Shine hazel
(â) Jules Head
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MsJola
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LiiN
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Psicodeli
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Riven
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Clothes
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Mizz Spank U Bla
!SJ!CoCo Chanel
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dress
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Accessories
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EyeLashes
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Actions
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Black Rose Glove
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[C] AZN GIRLY- L
[¥]⥠EyeLiner
Hand Scaler 75%
*A Super Long L
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OthellaSt
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666Ladyof
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Capsule
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Yaee
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Scaler
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Chinese
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!!Music!!
Headdresses
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SK~ Thick Red Ey
Beautiful Black
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Sunkissed
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June 13, 2013, 8:31 am
The eyelashes don't work here. I would start taking them off. The head+skin combination doesn't work here and her face looks awkward. I would change it. Hair in an updo would also be better as well. It'd be more formal that way. Other than those points, this is great.
B+
B+
June 13, 2013, 9:04 am
the eyelashes i agree are a bit to much i ain't liking this head here A-
June 15, 2013, 9:12 am
I like this. I do believe you could have found a better haircolor that fit this better. But otherwise well done. I like how she looks so classy and "Rich" lol.
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A
June 16, 2013, 10:19 am

A-
91.53 %
3 judges have voted, the average was 90.56 % ( A- )
Note: 1 member and 1 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 94.44 % ( A ) and rendered the final overall average to 91.53 % ( A- )