July 9, 2013, 8:08 am

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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Luna Avatar [Tal
*D Black Liquid
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Sinderell
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Dollfie
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8000
554
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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â| Gia Raven
Cool eyebrows -
[MT] Fern.Soho.E
|G| Pure Poison
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Vaydia
by
Chatoyent
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MissMaya
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Grindin
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444
499
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Clothes
TopShoes
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GOWN
#Plaz# Lala Shoe
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gowns
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Plaztique
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895
785
Accessories
!!Music!!Actions
Gloves
Dainty Hands
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P| Spikes - blk
Hand Scaler 75%
Perfect Hand Sca
Claw Nails
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Psicodeli
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Scaler
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ZaraKaine
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Lovers
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July 9, 2013, 12:47 pm
skin i dont like at all an i wouldnt have picked one of her tall avatar
A-
A-
July 9, 2013, 7:27 pm
You're getting so much better! I wish her head were different though, so that hair could work. I love when a short hair is used as most of the site is DOMINATED by long hair! I love how you went out there and tried it. Something on her wrist would perfect this. Overall, this is wonderful but change the head and hair; then she will be amazing! Keep up the great work.
B+
B+
July 9, 2013, 8:23 pm
I think the skin is too drastic here, it makes her look gothic. The head is kinda small as well, but I love the hair you chose. I'm not sure about the dress, it makes her waist look really really tiny and unproportional to the rest of her body, and the train on the back looks a little odd. I think a different necklace would better here as well, this one isn't really that dressy and kinda takes away from the classiness of the dress.
B
Edit: Typos XD
B
Edit: Typos XD
July 11, 2013, 10:45 am

B+
89.72 %
3 judges have voted, the average was 90.56 % ( A- )
Note: 1 member and 1 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 87.22 % ( B+ ) and rendered the final overall average to 89.72 % ( B+ )