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Description: I used the harsh angled eyebrows because I didn't want her to seem too innocent.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[c] Desdemona - [*L] 13.05: Luxu
byCorpseDolbyLumina
3499499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Clahi BlackNO EYEBROWSs| Bardo {Oceani.n77 Tessa Head 
byJavabyJinxbyScarlingbynikka77
661499499883

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

V' +Easy N Ying+s| Skin-Tight La[Anry] Dalia Sho
byVkeibyScarlingbyAnry
9391000664

Accessories

ActionsNailsBraceletsNew Acces.Necklaces

Hand Scaler 70%  . black nails#Plaz# Spiked R!S Real Brows - [Night] Brat col
byScalerbyPopbyPlaztiquebySinfullybyNight
399550663675664

Something about the skin and head combination really throw me off here. I would change the hair here as it makes her face look tremendously bublus and isn't very flattering. I also would have gone for different shoes here. I feel they make her look awkward in stances and it's just odd. I would try normal heels. I also would have liked to see darker eyes here. They're too light and make her look demonic here. I would have chosen hazel or green. Make sure you think about that when working with eyes. With dark skins like this light eyes look horrible and demonic. Overall, this is nice but it could be a lot better with a lot of tweaking.

B

I love this outfit! First off the hazel eyes, they look very similar to mine!
I think everything flows perfectly. My only complaint is that I wish the straps on the shoes
were a little thicker, just a smidge, but I believe that is my personal preference; since it doesn't
really take away from the look I think its fine You can definitely tell this girl isn't the "girl next door".
I LOVE IT!
A+++

I have to disagree entirely with Aeration here. I feel those heels clip into her ankles and give her funky looking cankles. The poses give her broken ankles, so I suggest finding another avatar that doesn't have odd poses with it. I agree on the eyes here. They're very freaky and I don't like it. I strongly think green would have been better. The eyebrows are horrible here. They go straight toward her nose bridge and almost connect by only a few centimeters it seems. I suggest you use different eyebrows that don't look freaky like these. Another thing I don't like here is the pants. They aren't the best of Scarling's work. The texture is just bad, really bad around the top of them. Quality products look better. Other hair would do this justice as well. Something curly and bigger wouldn't make her head look so awkward o.e. I hate how it makes her look. I agree that her face is sort of bulbous so I wouldn't use this skin and head together in the future. In all, I feel this isn't all that great as Aeration stated. I don't see an angry girl or a not-you're-next-door-girl look. I feel like more attention to detail would have made this exceptional but it wasn't executed in the slightest. This entry is a good try but this isn't your best.

B

Change the shoes.
I'm not sure about the head, i like it and then i don't.
Also the hands look odd in some of the photos.
Eh. Everything else looks ok here, nice job.
B+

The head is cute here i like it with the eyes. I like the eyebrows here with this cos it makes her look Goth for this is Chrissie's look and many others on IMVU . I only agree on the Shoes they are badly. The skin makes her look red tho. But other than them 2 things Nothing needs changed B+

I appreciate the idea of the outfit.
But, a lot of work has to be done for me
to give this a passing grade.
The head/skin combo is wrong,
the eyebrows are really thick
they give her a weird look.
A darker eye color would of been
a better approach.
The shoes make her feet look awkward.
I agree with AmplifiedSavagery on many points.
I'd like to see a resub, with this being tweaked
it will be a wonderful outfit I can see
many buying.
B

:/ I guess this outfit is a matter of opinion and style. Because I agree with Aeration. I think it's perfect.
A+

B+
89.9 %

3 judges have voted, the average was 86.11 % ( B )

Note: 2 member and 2 pro member reviews were taken into account.
Their weighted average was 95.56 % ( A ) and rendered the final overall average to 89.9 % ( B+ )