December 1, 2013, 3:33 am

Outfit Items: View
Description: Resub Golden Yellow Gown
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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TF Venus Avatar
-tgm-Req~KittySu
by
TheAvatar
by
thegangst
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831
499
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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â Fern Fudge
[mm] Thick DarkB
*n* -large- ligh
!S! Claudia Head
by
Tyra
by
miamew
by
nutsbar
by
Sirenize
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482
597
Clothes
TopShoes
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[RC]Sunshine
[DX01] 7" pumps
by
RomyChane
by
xDANIELx01
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650
510
Accessories
BraceletsEarrings
EyeLashes
EyeLashes
Actions
Nails
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Silver Diamond B
SLN Diamond Earr
II~ AZN-Lash Vol
pupa eyeliner
Hand Scaler 70%
c:| Slender Nail
by
Jinx428
by
SELEN
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Capsule
by
3D1O
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Scaler
by
ChicClass
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December 1, 2013, 5:50 am
The dress is fine.
The eyelashes are too long, you should change that
Use a different color for your eyes.
Also a different hair style will be better,
like another style of an up-do.
B+

December 1, 2013, 10:40 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
December 2, 2013, 9:55 am

Outfit Items: View
Description: Resub Golden Yellow Gown
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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TF Venus Avatar
-tgm-Req~KittySu
by
TheAvatar
by
thegangst
![]()
831
499
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
![]()
â Fern Fudge
[mm] Thick DarkB
*n* -large- ligh
!S! Claudia Head
by
Tyra
by
miamew
by
nutsbar
by
Sirenize
![]()
636
554
482
597
Clothes
TopShoes
![]()
[RC]Sunshine
[DX01] 7" pumps
by
RomyChane
by
xDANIELx01
![]()
650
510
Accessories
BraceletsEarrings
EyeLashes
EyeLashes
Actions
Nails
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Silver Diamond B
SLN Diamond Earr
II~ AZN-Lash Vol
pupa eyeliner
Hand Scaler 70%
c:| Slender Nail
by
Jinx428
by
SELEN
by
Capsule
by
3D1O
by
Scaler
by
ChicClass
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615
631
692
554
399
598


December 4, 2013, 1:43 pm
B+
Did not change at all from the first submission
The hair color is too close to the skin
Would use a lighter skin
Not liking this head type here would use a more "mature" one
The eyes are a lil bland as well
Did not change at all from the first submission
The hair color is too close to the skin
Would use a lighter skin
Not liking this head type here would use a more "mature" one
The eyes are a lil bland as well
December 4, 2013, 10:29 pm
I replaced the first submission with the resub...the hair was a short haircut...its now an updo the eyes were teal...now brown....t.I used diffrent lashes...why would i enter the exact same submission? That logic is beyond me. I did take the suggestions into account and this is the second submission.
December 4, 2013, 10:49 pm
Because you changed the original outfit we can't see the changes, we're going off what we see and from what we see, it looks like nothing has changed. That's why you post the outfit as a reply and don't make a new post or edit the first post so that we can see the improvements you made but because you changed it, we can't see any changes.
December 8, 2013, 12:59 am

B+
86.91 %
2 of the required 3 judges have voted with an average of 86.67 % ( B+ ).
Note: 1 member review was taken into account.
Their review was 88.33 % ( B+ ) and rendered the final overall average to 86.91 % ( B+ )
Although 3 judges are required for decision, if 1 more judge gave this a relatively high grade of A, it will still only have 89.33 %.
There is no way this outfit could have met the required 90% to be approved.