Outfit Items: View
Description: Black and white beach chic










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Emm Cee 2 Pose[Aura/Busty|Topa
byHudsonbyPierce
774609

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

|Kinley Duo[MT] Mesh.H Eyes[Topaz|Vanity/Nu
byMrsKittybyMissMayabyPierce
6634994399

Clothes

TopBottom1 Duplicate

$ Broadband Bra !L9! Pinned up SPoint-Toe Pumps 
byIrrelevanbyPrettiKittibyGwen
5485541000

Accessories

Dainty HandsActionsActionsActionsLuscious LipsNew Acces.

OPI. A-Ha! MomenFoot Shoe ScalerCombo Scaler S90Smaller Waist ScLip Pop - NudeBindi Black(OP)
byHauteFashionbyScalerbyScalerbyAnarchbyAnarchbyOstin
475399419699799999

I love the concept of this outfit, yet, there are a few things to keep in mind.
Her hands are too small. a 70-80% scaler would correct that.
Also, the added lip gloss ruins the lips. When I took it off, it looked much better.
Further, a darker shade of black for the shoes to match the other pieces of the fit is needed.
The 3 dots on her face are not need; they seem out of place in this outfit. She also needs more accessories.
The boob region is odd. This is due to the avatar.
This outfit has A LOT of potential, it just needs a resub.

B-

(Sorry for editing this post)

I agree with everything shes said ^
Other than those points shes made,
I feel like you've used the same styled top
in some of your previous submissions.
dont be afraid to show some different style.
& make sure you find better textures worth of clothing.
Keep trying, Im looking forward to seeing your submissions.

B

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B+

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B+

I'd like to see you switch something up with your whole head/skin combo / usual basics of your outfits.
Plus everything already stated above.

B+

B+
88.07 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B  : iWhiteAngeI : 626            |
|          B+ : Nerves      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo     : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 85 % ( B ) with a rating weight of 626.

Resub Granted

Okay hopefully I fixed the corrections said thanks for all constructive criticism


Outfit Items: View
Description:










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Free[Aura/Busty|Kiss
byMiseobyPierce
773609

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

F| Kinley Black[MT] Mesh.H Eyes[Kiss|Vanity/Jor
byFinebyMissMayabyPierce
6414994399

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

$ Broadband Bra !L9! Pinned up S<3 [ZARA] Destiny .
byIrrelevanbyPrettiKittibyZARAshoes
548554488

Accessories

NecklacesActionsActionsActionsDainty Hands

[K]PewterFoot Shoe ScalerCombo Scaler S90Smaller Waist Sc-CK- Jungle Feva
byRiskeeDimbyScalerbyScalerbyAnarchbyCocaKeyz
524399419699609

better!

A

I think I liked the other shoes more, lol.
Bracelet/ring?

A-