June 12, 2014, 10:26 am

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Description: Modern day teenager look - Goth/Grunge/Pastel Hope it looks good and you guys enjoy it ^-^
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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::W: Rosette Ava
Innocent
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Arctic
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Nether
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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| Carla [mid]
Derivable No Eye
[MT] Mesh.H Eyes
[E]*Dema Head*
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Nether
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MrsAgitated
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MissMaya
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EpicErin
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Clothes
Top4 Duplicates
Shoes
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'| Faderz White
{F} Girllish hig
::A: Kerli Inspi
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Minah
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Flood
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Arctic
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Accessories
Dainty HandsActions
Backpacks
Miscellaneous
Headdresses
EyeLashes
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!E Short nails [
Hand Scaler 70%
Back to school
Shoulder Scaler
Crown B&W
|J| Kpop Lashes
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Ellen
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Scaler
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Psicodeli
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Rozen
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Psicodeli
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Joanxz
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Ear Plugs
Custom Shaped
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P| Small Plugs
. Perfect Brow |
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Panties
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Zephyr
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June 12, 2014, 10:46 am
So cute! Not sure about the proportions tho. Her head looks really big, even for a child, but this is supposed to be a teenager? I would suggest a different avi, a taller one with poses, b/c no one likes a still avi. The clothes are Ok, but the proportions are just too off, sorry sweetie. Nice try tho!
B+
B+
June 12, 2014, 11:09 am
I agree with Shan, your proportions are off. Maybe a different % shoulder scaler.
I disagree about no one liking still avis, I use them all the time. However, the pose
Of this one isn't great. Your feet look huge, a foot/shoe scaler, or perhaps a different pair of boots
Would have been good.
Overall, this is cute, just a few things to work on.
B+
I disagree about no one liking still avis, I use them all the time. However, the pose
Of this one isn't great. Your feet look huge, a foot/shoe scaler, or perhaps a different pair of boots
Would have been good.
Overall, this is cute, just a few things to work on.
B+
June 12, 2014, 11:25 am
Still avis have become a fad, so that part is fine.
But I do agree that the proportions are crazy as stated above.
B+
But I do agree that the proportions are crazy as stated above.
B+
June 12, 2014, 11:28 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Shannazzz : Judge | | B+ : Pumpclubba : 692 | | B+ : Weeaboo : Judge | | B+ : iMoo : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 692.
June 12, 2014, 1:56 pm
Alright, thanks for the feed back and i wasnt sure if feet scalers were allowed otherwise i'd put one on aha, i understand what you are all saying and i'll try and improve it!