July 30, 2014, 8:23 am
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Sinderell
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July 30, 2014, 10:41 am
This is beautiful and I love how her brown hair looks against the red dress. It's very sexy and I like how the dress gives her a full figure. I have nothing bad to say. Keep up the improvement!
A
A
July 30, 2014, 11:48 am
I love it.
The dress against the skin you've chose goes well together.
A+
July 30, 2014, 3:14 pm
"The outfit itself is unsuitable or inappropriate for Sedulity; B-'s indicate the outfit does not pass all the minimum requirements of each aspect by your standards."
Please read the rules of how to grade submissions and failing an outfit by linking a Youtube video is pointless. Refer here for the guidelines of how to judge.
Please read the rules of how to grade submissions and failing an outfit by linking a Youtube video is pointless. Refer here for the guidelines of how to judge.
July 30, 2014, 3:32 pm
i'm laughin' cause you're over there with ya bitchass postin big booty judy like that shit aint pointless byeeeee
July 30, 2014, 3:41 pm
It is not a valid reason. Also, that is unrelevant to this submission. Please take your immature spamming somewhere else. @ HBTM, I would not worry about that person's unreasonable grade as they did not give valid reasoning for it nor would their grade have very much effect on your submission; I hope.
July 30, 2014, 3:50 pm
The nail color is too bright for her dress, it doesn't match.
You didn't wear the "no eyebrow" enhancement so you have double eyebrows.....
Her head is an awkward and her lashes are huge.
I don't really like this, but I do like that the shoes and dress match.
B-
July 30, 2014, 3:54 pm
bitch shut up
i think generally the whole thing adds towards the skin that's naff, but because there's so much skin exposed and not much else to combat the shitey skin, so, in my eyes, that adds up to a b- and it's staying a b- because fuck dauntless
i think generally the whole thing adds towards the skin that's naff, but because there's so much skin exposed and not much else to combat the shitey skin, so, in my eyes, that adds up to a b- and it's staying a b- because fuck dauntless
July 30, 2014, 3:56 pm
Its okay HBTN~
Your outfit might get declined and you will get a resub so you can add it in and fix anything that is wrong with your outfit, declines arent a big deal as long as you get at least a B+, which you will
So no worries! xoxoxo
July 30, 2014, 3:59 pm
awkard i can respect ur judgment if u said it with less harsh .. but ur way is so .... no more words to say ty
July 30, 2014, 3:59 pm
I am not a fan of the skin or the head, also the beauty mark. Dress is cute but I would have gone for black heels for showing more attention to the dress as it looks a bit plain for me. Too many accesories from the same creator, you could have tried others.
B
B
July 30, 2014, 4:01 pm
@ awkward, your extreme immaturity and still invalid grading is only making you look worse. Do yourself a favor and cease the spamming of this thread. Your invalid grading will most likely not fail this submission, so please grow up and troll another group.
July 30, 2014, 4:02 pm
np at all aeration judgment i guess is according to ur own point of view i 'm still new and learns every day more no worries at all it's not a big deal ty
July 30, 2014, 4:06 pm
No problem! And I'm glad you can take a critique
A lot of people on here don't know how to do that or grow to better their style!
I can see you will do very well here and your outfits will get better each submission!
@Ruls
Omg I forgot to mention the accessory thing as well, I noticed it just forgot to type it XD
July 30, 2014, 4:08 pm
I agree with Aeration and Ruls except I think the skin has eyebrows on it, which gives the double brow effect. I'm not really sure why devs do that.
B-
B-
July 30, 2014, 4:09 pm
A-
92.22 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 92.22 % ( A- )
Grading Breakdown:
| A : Dauntless : 1 | | A+ : Dosen : Judge | | A : iMoo : Judge | | A : Minah : 1 | | B- : awkward : 1 | | B- : Aeration : 1 | | B : Ruls : 1 | | B- : Frightful : Judge |
Note: 5 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 87.67 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1.
July 30, 2014, 4:09 pm
i think accessories from the same creator isn't against the roles it's acceptable since they r fit with the look , is it ?
July 30, 2014, 4:13 pm
lol ..and what's ur words mean awkard .. i think u need to overcome ur silliness sry