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Description: Gucci White dress










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Sensual Tall#e Fashionista (
bylllBusebyenjoo
1100499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

{BL}Fawnity BreaK* Real Blonde E[TW]ufo!blure gr{e}Gina
bypetyofAmonbykpasa79byTerukochabyenjoo
771345389499

Clothes

TopShoes

~nau~ GuCCi whitPearly White Pum
bynahushalbyAngelBBYS
699609

Accessories

Dainty HandsHeadbandsEarringsAnkletsFace PaintActions

C! Dainty Gold NGold Sun Head BaGold Diva EaringRuby Heart AnkleY! Hot pink BlusBoob Enhancer B
byCHANELIIIbyFreshProdbypinkAliiciabyJobyYasminyzbyDrVinnieDixxNXS
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Necklaces

(DAN) Zara Neckl
byUSAdannda
410

First off, the head you are using is outdated and I would update if I were you. Second, the skin does not work with the head and it looks childish with the HUGE eyes and such. Your head is tiny versus your body. Be careful with proportions as they are extremely important in the presentation of the avatar. The boob enhancer was not needed as it distorts the avatars figure and I suggest to not use anything that enhances the avatar's shape in the chest. Also, a hand resizer will help you out so much as it is needed so your hands aren't huge and chunky. I suggest ZaraKaine's in the glove section of the shop. Also, you need to take *hiresnobg instead of printscreen as no one uses that anymore and it's the outdated way to do things. The anklet doesn't work as the heels already have a sort of anklet thing going there and it was unnecessary to add an anklet. When working with gold make sure to try to match the gold colors as close as possible or you will end up with a trainwreck like so. This is a good attempt but keep trying, don't give up, and work hard to better yourself and update your avatar!

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I agree with completely everything ^
Nice try though!!
I'll be looking forward to seeing another one of your submissions soon.

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Agree with Daunt. Also try and get a thicker brow so hers don't disappear being this color blonde.

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Agree with Daunt. Also try and get a thicker brow so hers don't disappear being this color blonde.

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This actually fails a rule.
You have to use a shadowless room.

Plus I agree with all of the above. x

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2 judges have voted, the judge average was 65.84 % ( D )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B- : Dauntless   : 1264           |
|          B- : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B- : Japan       : 1356           |
|          B- : Nerves      : 1460           |
|          B- : Minah       : 1631           |
|          F  : iMoo        : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message Implex to be granted a resub.

5 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 81.67 % ( B- ) with an average rating weight of 1468.

to many duplicates or I was going to use head suggested by nikka an please tell me what is a shadowless room pic was taken from dressing room,is the skin no good alltogether or just with outdated head,I tried no eyebrows but it was duplicated a number of times actually a number of things were duplicated so I was forced to change pic several times thx for your input