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Description: Please disregard the duplicate D:
I really like this gothic look, I hope you do too.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Katerina AvatarA. AMIRA Wine / 
bySinderellbyAgnes
3999505

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Ocie Ombre[*L] Mark'd | ma!!!**[S] No Eyeb| Capricorn Yl Head Mia exc.
byFinebyLuminabysynamonnby0BEYbyYunoq
639538345505988

Clothes

TopTop1 Duplicate

{MB} Goth Pauldr Goth dollSith ballets
byMegaeraBlbyPsicodelibyNight
688664719

Accessories

HornsGlovesGlovesHatsDainty Hands

Chained Leg SpikG13 Avatar HandsM/F Fingers EnhaFedorable..Cst: Nails + Ri
byTheCoojbyGRIMXIII_byMara2oXllbyNamdibyDashing
803444590554799

This is good but a mature head would fit here a lot better than the baby face. I also find the high arched eyebrows rather freaky and I would abstain from using those. The leg spikes were unnecessary and kind of overboard. They don't work with the outfit itself. Other than those points, this is nice but I dunno, maybe a resub will fix this.

B+

Hello!! This is a great attempt, there are some minor hitches:
I don't like the shoes with this, the hat seems random and so does the shoulder accessory. I feel that the shoe and the accessory go together more than anything in this. Also, try using a more mature head and the eyebrows are fine for the theme you chose just with a more mature face. Would love to see a resub! Happy Submitting.

B+

This is a tad bit all over the place. The shoes are awkward looking here, I think a black heel in a more regular shape would have fit better. These shoes are better with the high fashion category. You have on two hand scalers and the dainty hand mesh so the combination has made your hands too small. I also think you should have added a bracelet or two. The shoulder piece is pretty cool but since it's pvc, along with the shoes, it just looks out of place here as well. The hair also glitches a lot with the shoulder piece. (goes through it) Her face is nice but the eyes and brows are distracting. A fuller accessory brow would be better and make them look less drawn on. The eyes are pretty but with this look they just don't fit. I think a regular grey eye would still be pretty though.

B+

All has been said.
I like the shoes alot thou...

B

^^^^

B+

B+

I mostly agree with Daunt, and then some points in the other comments.
Like the hat is extremely random imo, and the shoes would be better suited if you had some leggings or something. Preferably, they could just be changed though. x

B+

B+
87.7 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Dauntless   : 1264           |
|          B+ : Nerves      : 1460           |
|          B+ : Minah       : 1631           |
|          B  : Dosen       : Judge          |
|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : Japan       : 1356           |
|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |

Note: 4 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1428.

Resub Granted