August 11, 2014, 6:13 am

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Description: I loved the idea od presenting our realityselves through submission. This is me(ish) (I'm chubbier than her,have bigger eyes and a bit darker hair). I have long straight dark-brown hair, I'm very pale. I like simple clothes, I actually have leather pants and white chucks just like these, the sweater I have is same shape as this one just completely gray,I always have my nails done(it's a weird obsession o mine), I usually have some kind o accessory(necklace,watch,ring) here I've chosen the necklace (:
Avatars & Skin
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Ash Avatar
[DM] Pale Skin
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Sinderell
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DarkMald
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Head & Face
HairEyes
Head
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F| Diiva Faded
[MT] Grace - Cho
. Liz | ultra me
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Fine
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MissMaya
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Zephyr
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Clothes
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Shoes
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! Villain Crew
J. Leather Weath
White Converse.
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Nobody
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Jams
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xMOHV
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Accessories
GlovesGloves
Necklaces
Custom Shaped
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Perfect Hand Sca
Living dead
[Anry] Leasie Ne
. liz brows | br
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ZaraKaine
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Psicodeli
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Anry
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Zephyr
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August 11, 2014, 6:41 am
Cute style! I have a few issues though ;3 The head and skin do not match up, you used a zephyr head and Zephyr happens to have some matching skins for it. I like the sweater and necklace combo but I don't think the pants go with this so much. I know this is your personal style and I'm sure it looks a whole lot cuter irl but on this avi the pants are poorly done. I also wish the pants met the shoe more and didn't create all the ankle space.
B+
B+
August 11, 2014, 7:00 am
I wasn't sure if I was allowed to use more than 3 items from a same dev so I chosen to use only the eyebrows and the head,thanks for the tips

August 11, 2014, 8:17 am
Agreed with Bri, if it's a mesh head like this you are allowed because the devs make matching skintones and accessories
B+
B+
August 11, 2014, 10:14 am
I agree with the pants a different pair would look better here
With a little work this would be totally cute
B+
August 11, 2014, 11:28 am

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Minah : 1770 | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : iMoo : Judge | | B+ : Ashlynn : 1493 | | B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge |
Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1632.
August 12, 2014, 4:38 am

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Description: Changed the bottoms and shoes,skin also, added a ring (:
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Ash Avatar
. it's all in yo
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Sinderell
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Zephyr
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980
444
Head & Face
HairEyes
Head
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F| Diiva Faded
[MT] Grace - Cho
. Liz | ultra me
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Fine
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MissMaya
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Zephyr
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641
499
1000
Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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! Villain Crew
Rep Black Out
LL* Classic Comb
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Nobody
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lDB
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LanieLush
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609
653
608
Accessories
GlovesGloves
Rings
Necklaces
Custom Shaped
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Perfect Hand Sca
Living dead
*A Cross Ring
[Anry] Leasie Ne
. liz brows | br
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ZaraKaine
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Psicodeli
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Adrienell
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Anry
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Zephyr
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499
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August 12, 2014, 12:11 pm
I'm actually not a fan of the skin especially with the clothes. I enjoy everything else though
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