Outfit Items: View
Description:
Well I was searching for something I liked, and I came across the top and liked it. The bottoms are to add some color.
This is my first time doing this, so I hope I am doing it right. I know there was a duplicate.. But after seeing what the duplicate was, I hope this is alright.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar-tgm-Noir II
bySinderellbythegangst
980466

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Sahara BlackAu naturel EyebrNo Eyebrows N/De!A| glitch: gree| Halley's Comet
byFineby513michellebyRavenclawbyawkwardby0BEY
641600334444900

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottomShoes

.D. WhiteSweaterBeing you is FRE! JC Mesh Boots 
byDerpinabyQuillbyNobody
598664587

Accessories

ActionsActionsEar PlugsDainty Hands

Hand Scaler 65%Shoulder Scaler | Night Sky TinyThorn'd Love nai
byScalerbyScalerby0BEYbyespirelda
399419600554

I really like what you were doing with this cause it makes the pants stand out a lot.
I just kinda wish you chose another shirt cause this ones
a bit too casual looking. Doesn't get a feel of like a hipster sort of look, y'know?
& I wish you found different shoes since these dont have much texture in them.
Just way too bright. >.< Also the hair is a bit too formal/dressy, imo.
I'd reallly really love to see a resub of this. Sorry D;

B+

I agree about the shoes and hair, mostly.
Personally, I like the idea of that color pulling attention to your outfit, but it could be done in a better way.
I also think that the nails and lipstick could be lighter colors for the sake of the shorts and brighter clothes. x

B+

i don't like the top with the shorts at all, also i find the shoes are just soild white and they look awkward. i agree about the hair comment

B

B+
87.22 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iWhiteAngeI : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo        : Judge          |
|          B  : Weeaboo     : Judge          |

Resub Granted

Outfit Items: View
Description: Changed: shirt, nails, hair, skin and added a foot scaler.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar-tgm-1960's II
bySinderellbythegangst
980466

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Diiva BlackAu naturel EyebrNo Eyebrows N/De!A| glitch: gree| Halley's Comet
byFineby513michellebyRavenclawbyawkwardby0BEY
641600334444900

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

*W* Andi Casual Being you is FRE! JC Mesh Boots 
byWhimsbyQuillbyNobody
653664587

Accessories

GlovesActionsActionsActionsEar Plugs

pink nails perfeHand Scaler 65%Foot Shoe ScalerShoulder Scaler | Night Sky Tiny
byusybyScalerbyScalerbyScalerby0BEY
498399399419600

This is much better, but the shoes are still meh. ;c The texture is better from side view though.

A-

^

A-

i like the hair better, top is ok. still not a fan of the shoes but i know the resub rules says you have to keep them

A-