August 21, 2014, 4:40 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: Katy Blue Slim Bundle ???
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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Victoria LITE
Dm. Fira|Tan'
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Sinderell
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Demure
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650
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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! Selena Animate
~N~ No Brows
[MT] Grace - Blu
| China Doll
by
Lee
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Nyrisse
by
MissMaya
by
Fine
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362
499
476
Clothes
TopShoes
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Lg-Katy Blue SLI
Lg-Katy Blue Pum
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Ligy
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Ligy
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578
Accessories
EarringsNecklaces
Dainty Hands
Spice Glasses
Actions
Actions
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! silver star ea
-RK- Star's Neck
C - RED SQUARED
STARRR BELLY RIN
*M* Foot Resizer
|M| Hand Resizer
by
cecilieh
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ruckiteer
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Templar
by
Agallisa
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Mole
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Mola
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New Acces.
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s| Lina Brows {B
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Scarling
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August 21, 2014, 8:46 pm
Bundles require at least four extras by the developer, not just the top+bottoms+shoes.
But since you didn't tag it as a bundle, it's still possible to pass it with an A- given that the outfit simply 'lacks variety.'
Just letting you know for future reference. x
Grading, now:
The naval piercing isn't needed and the nails are too long imo. I would have liked a more subtle color besides red, so she didn't look like the American Flag. That being said, I think a soft pink or neutral color for her lips and white or clear nail polish would work better here.
A slight shoulder scaler would be nice as well.
But overall, you've made big improvements. I'm happy for you.
A-
But since you didn't tag it as a bundle, it's still possible to pass it with an A- given that the outfit simply 'lacks variety.'
Just letting you know for future reference. x
Grading, now:
The naval piercing isn't needed and the nails are too long imo. I would have liked a more subtle color besides red, so she didn't look like the American Flag. That being said, I think a soft pink or neutral color for her lips and white or clear nail polish would work better here.
A slight shoulder scaler would be nice as well.
But overall, you've made big improvements. I'm happy for you.
A-
August 21, 2014, 8:49 pm
For scalers, I recommend using the creator Scaler.
I don't like the nails. I wish you went with blue or silver, red seems way out of place.
I agree with Moo though.
A-
August 21, 2014, 10:40 pm

A-
91.67 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 91.67 % ( A- )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : iMoo : Judge | | A- : EmeraldLagoon : 1291 | | A- : kimmipanda : Judge |
Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 9.66 %.
1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 91.67 % ( A- ) with a rating weight of 1291.
August 22, 2014, 12:22 am
don't remember using 4 items from same creator b4 an was told to label it as bundle,lacks varity this was not a resub but did try this dress b4 an it was liked by all now that I stumbled upon the shoes to match it lacks variety.' I know you look @ alot of fits an accessories hardly anyones on the same page you like something then other submissions you don't like I don't know what you want me to do I wore leg jewlery nothing was said did a resub then the leg jewelery wasn't any good an by same judge