September 17, 2014, 2:54 am

Outfit Items: View
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Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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. Kayluh *avi
M� Dangers Retol
by
Messiah
by
Myjrn
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499
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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E. Samantha Blac
NO EYEBROWS
+ Brown Envy M/F
$ Keela Head
by
Eci
by
Jinx
by
Sanrio
by
beso
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647
499
499
988
Clothes
TopShoes
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E. Party Dress
DMW*GZ.Heels Cha
by
Eci
by
DanyM0stW
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675
499
Accessories
ActionsActions
Purses
Necklaces
Dainty Hands
Custom Shaped
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Shoulder Scaler
Hands Scaler
Classy Clutch
Harlett.
.Cst: Oil Nails.
m| Carla brows b
by
Scaler
by
Scaler
by
Moonrise
by
Trini
by
Dashing
by
Moonrise
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419
598
501
634
699
609


September 17, 2014, 4:58 am
I don't feel the skin here.. While the outfit is professional/dressy/elegant, the skin kind of pulls away from that look..
The shades of gold don't match here, imo..
You could have also used a small bracelet or ring instead of the clutch, because it lays flat against the dress.
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The shades of gold don't match here, imo..
You could have also used a small bracelet or ring instead of the clutch, because it lays flat against the dress.
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September 17, 2014, 6:55 am
I agree on the skin. Also the head+eye combo here is not that appealing. I feel that you could have actually used a ring or bracelet along with the clutch. The golds are slightly not matching though, more noticeably the shoes and necklace. That necklace is also very overused since it's front page. I just like to see when people search shop more.
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September 17, 2014, 7:33 pm
I agree on the head and skin combo comment.
I'm also really not liking the hair. Wish you could of
accessorized a little more wisely like Minah said.
Also, the still avi makes her look a little grumpy.
Try going for a non-still avi, cause usually most of the
still avi's form the face a little different (depends on which one I guess)
Sorry but I think this could use a resub; could turn into something mucho better, imo.

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