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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

J' Stylin AviV4NY|Nessa CleanV4NY|TrueLong La
byJCarter_dbyV4NYbyV4NY
800554721

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Rudenia Mocha!!!**[S] No Eyeb[iD] Ocean Glow V4NY|Allie Clean
byFinebysynamonnbyiDanibyV4NY
6393456141098

Clothes

TopShoes

.D. StillIntoYou| Ima Read
byDerpinabyGwen
697697

Accessories

Dainty HandsActionsFace Paint

 Xx WhiteHands ScalerV4NY|Allie MakeF
byKravedbyScalerbyV4NY
554598637

Hi Kayleen! Nice first submission. 8D You need a few minor tweaks though. I'm not sure if its the head you used or the hair but your head looks rather small. I'm not sure I like the lip color here either. It seems in your screenies you used a scaler but when you submitted the look the scaler isn't on. It could have been an accident but this outfit looks much better without a body scaler. Generally in Sedulity submissions are better with just a shoulder scaler and hand scaler. Outfit wise I like the top and bottoms I'm just not certain on shoe choice. Great submission though for a beginner.

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Arms and legs look huge. Shoes kinda look out of place. Agree with above

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Welcome to Sedulity Kayleen
Not too bad for the first submission!
The only thing I think that needs some tweaking
is the hair and the shoes! I really love the head and skin combo,
it kinda matched up well with her top.

As for the hair, try going for something a little more out there?
Nothing closed in, like the hair you used here. As for the shoes,
try going for some cute black heels? Or maybe even something casual
that fits your shirt! Perhaps vans? Its just that the one you have here
sorta doesnt match anything. As for the scaler that Minah pointed out,
if you end up getting a resub, I think it'd look best without it imo!
Over all great job! This deserves another go. Keep up the submissions!

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