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Description: More personal, but I thought it was pretty enough to submit..










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatarm| October [dark
bySinderellbyMoonrise
980499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

V| Lady Ariel *H[Is] NO Eyebrows[MT] Sky.Soho.EyKD^ZARA HEAD [PL
byVeilbyIsmenybyMissMayabykloudust
661389499878

Clothes

TopShoes

[M]Captivating Owhite n gold hee
byOoMamasitbyClacce
660774

Accessories

Nails MulticolActionsActionsBraceletsNew Acces.

[H] Gold nails-DShoulder Scaler Hands ScalerLgLena Pearl Bra|M. Nani Red Bro
byH2011byScalerbyScalerbyLigybyMiiavv
609419598565719

I like the outfit...not so sure about the skin and head combo. Wish your eyes were a bit darker and also wish you used a different hair style/maybe even color to show off the design around the shirt area. I would have picked shoes that came up the leg more to take away the fact that the pants stop were the ankles meet (that bugs me for some reason...and bugs me more on tall avi's) But i dont think this is a tall avi here...i believe...Also hands are a bit small in the photo...i say that because i normally use 70 percent hand scale...so could be the picture/pose you have chosen.

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3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Aucalio   : 1417           |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1417.

So.. resub?

Resub granted

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Description: I had actually been going for Ariel/The Little Mermaid when I very first started, but it kind of turned out not so much like her, so I didn't mind changing things. I changed the hair, and I actually like it much better. The darkness doesn't distract so much. I also changed the eyes to a darker color (brown), but left the head/skin combo alone because I liked it.. I also changed the shoes, but couldn't find any tall enough to hide the bottom of her pants.. so hope it's better.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatarm| October [dark
bySinderellbyMoonrise
980499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

Bryony Night[Is] NO Eyebrows[MT] Grace - ChoKD^ZARA HEAD [PL
byCohobyIsmenybyMissMayabykloudust
663389499878

Clothes

TopShoes

[M]Captivating O[M]Captivating S
byOoMamasitbyOoMamasit
660637

Accessories

Nails MulticolActionsActionsCustom Shaped Bracelets

[H] Gold nails-DShoulder Scaler Hands Scaler. perfect thick LgLena Pearl Bra
byH2011byScalerbyScalerbyZephyrbyLigy
609419598666565

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I'm glad you kept the head and skin, but I wish you had kept her ginger, she was super cute!! Good outfit altogether tho, so well done!

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