Outfit Items: View
Description: Odd look that I somehow love.
#firsttimeusingazephyrskin
Also pale skin clashed too much with the skirt.
Black eyes looked too dark blue eyes were too light, so brown looked decent.







Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar. sulfur | med
bySinderellbyZephyr
980444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Senya BlackNo Eyebrows N/De[MT] Elys . BrowCherry Head
byFinebyRavenclawbyMissMayabyAnie
641334499889

Clothes

TopTopShoes

 Kenzo Asus Skirt Ligh!0CONVERSE:MMFKn
byPsicodelibyEvesby0AE
609609649

Accessories

GlovesEar PlugsActionsActionsCustom Shaped 

| SmlHand; Silve; Pentagram PlugShoulder Scaler Avatar Perfect Hs| Kali Brows {B
by0BEYby0BEYbyScalerbyMrRackCitbyScarling
450485419499666

This is interesting but I don't like the hairstyle or the open mouth but it's mostly the hair that bothers me.

A-

There's a few things that are a little unsettling about this. I don't like the hair. And the shoe mesh for your converse sneakers is not converse-y at all. I'd like to see a resub with a different hair and different shoes


B+

@Ajak the shoes were picked because of the little eyes on the side.

I noticed that and it's dope that you matched it up that way I just think the mesh is really super dated and there are updated converse meshes in shop you know? That's just how I feel. If other members think the shoes are fine then keep em. The design is cool it's just the mesh that bugs me.

I get it. I wasn't really going for converse, just something more casual. I just happened to be lucky to find someone with an eye on the side. xD Now if someone has the updated mesh with the eye on the side, you can go hunting for me. Lol.

I think the skirt is what throws me off more than anything. I think if you had some cute denim shorts or jeans in black or white even, would pull this look off so much better, then I wouldn't mind the hair so much. I'd like to see a resub fixing either suggestions.

B+

Something is throwing me off in the face area, not really sure what, but I agree with Callie on the skirt. This is cute otherwise.

B+

B+
88.9 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Nerves    : 1542           |
|          B+ : Ajak      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Whipped   : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 91.67 % ( A- ) with a rating weight of 1542.

Resub?
And I don't get how someone can give a B+ for two items.
It's been said before "^ you don't give a B+ just for two items."
I understand the skirt one.

Resub??
You know there wouldn't be so much backlash about your delayed resubbing if you would resub people who ask for resubs instead of resubbing other submissions as soon as they are denied.

I asked for a resub the other day on this, and well, and well another submission gets a resub like shortly after it's denied. Hmmm. Same with Shanna who asked for a resub. I don't mind waiting but I don't see how it is that resubs aren't given in order in which they are asked.

Resubs are given to out first to the people that message me asking for resubs, I get around to going through them manually about once a week if I'm lucky. I am in school, so is Callie, we have homework to do. At this time no resub will be granted for this until we discuss your attitude.

Sorry, just figured that we ask for a resub here, that maybe as you guys are strolling through the threads and you see the red "new" thing on a thread, that you opened it. Sorry that I thought wrong.

Resub granted

Outfit Items: View
Description: Changed the skirt and hair.
Regular/high waist-ed shorts and pants looked weird with the top.
Due to changing the skirt, the shoes couldn't be changed.








Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar. sulfur | med
bySinderellbyZephyr
980444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

E. Saffron BlackNo Eyebrows N/De[MT] Elys . BlueCherry Head
byExzybyRavenclawbyMissMayabyAnie
669334499889

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 Kenzo Gray Denim Skir!0CONVERSE:MMFKn
byPsicodelibyEvesby0AE
609609649

Accessories

GlovesActionsActionsCustom Shaped 

| SmlHand; SilveShoulder Scaler Avatar Perfect Hs| Kali Brows {B
by0BEYbyScalerbyMrRackCitbyScarling
450419499666

I for one had no problems with the first submission on this
The hair really bothers me, now. The hat and hair blend too much,
so it looks like you have a lump of hair sticking on the side =n=
I do like the skirt, better tho.

A-

I agree the hat is a bit weird but I like this skirt with the shirt.

A-

what made you pick this hairstyle... XD... this is better overall.

A-