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Description: This is my first ever outfit that I am submitting. A little nervous but I'm fairly pleased with what I've put together. I wanted to do a Christmas-y type attire for a Christmas party or something around those lines. I went with White and Red with Rubies and went very light with the makeup to not overdo the entire outfit.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

*VN Pandora Fede! Clary Smokie P
byVisNovabyLee
2533466

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Brogan 2 Black[A] No Eyebrows[KISA]ThoseGreen. allie no lash+
byPHbyAlwaysbyKisaTheCubyZephyr
663351499988

Clothes

TopShoes

Red & White Form(ISA)DIVA HEELS 
byMonksbyisabelpai
950750

Accessories

BraceletsDainty HandsEarringsActionsNecklacesCustom Shaped 

Ruby & Diamonds [xx] Lush - CherRuby Goddess EarHand Scaler 75%Ruby Necklace. perfect thick 
byAbathyrbyLexxbyAbathyrbyScalerbyChenbyZephyr
593699669399664666

Face Paint

. allie gyaru ma
byZephyr
582

The dress mesh is very nice, they have a lot of nice dresses of the derivations of it. This one is decent, it does seem christmasy and there was another one which also looked xmasy that had some better features of it. I kind of wish the ups of that dress were combined with the upsides of this dress.This dress seems to have some intentional shading that make it look undone at the bottom part, almost like a 256 color was applied to it but I assumed this was done intentionally instead of shading it in.

I don't like the ear rings a whole lot and I think the hair really takes away from how pretty her face is. I don't like the bangs of it specifically.

Overall this is a good first submission, good job. You matches accessories as they should, made sure nails were right color. Had a pretty skin/face combo and overall found a nice dress.

A-

Oh I almost forgot, you almost never want to use Visnova's newer model avatars because they were created when gigas were a thing, and have a 110 or 120% scaler built into them, giving the face a semi-slanted look and making the avatar way too tall/huge. It will look quite deformed on the website as well (you'll seem like a giant)

To demostrate my point, this is how it will look on the website, you can really see how it compares in size:

Your face is beautiful. But I think the peachy lip kinda clashes with the red of the dress. I agree that the avi is super large.

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The texture on the dress isn't that great,
good first try though!
I like the fit, but next time maybe try a diff skin,
not really a fan of the white balance on this one,
as well as I feel like a resub is needed to fix your avi problem,
you might could even switch out some accessories

B+