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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Riri64' PARADISO
byHudsonbyMahogany
774664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

Lilita!!!**[S] No Eyeb[MT] Sky.Soho.EyHead Scaler [HumNu. Marcela | He
byBSGbysynamonnbyMissMayabyZaraKainebyNuena
663345499359980

Clothes

Top2 Duplicates1 Duplicate

~A: Natural'PullTc. PaisleyILouboutin Nude
bylllAdrianbyXiubyIZIS
730680660

Accessories

Facial JewelryFacial JewelryFacial JewelryActionsActionsEyeLashes

SUmmer Rose Blus!Septum Piercing*W* Ellis Star PLeg Thigh ScalerCombo Scaler S95 My Lashes
byIP0SHIbyKeizukabyWhimsbyScalerbyScalerbyMahogany
5524445813994191000

MiscellaneousNew Acces.New Acces.

Short Avi Size 9Babygirl|Brown eBeauty Mark
byVirtuallybyGangstalitioubyLovers
420780565

Not really sure what the aim is with this outfit. The septum isn't needed, I'm not sure about the hair style/bow, and otherwise she's lacking accessories.
I'd say gold accessories... take off the lashes because they don't fit the eyes, and I can't really see the star eye things? The short avi size isn't really needed either.
A nice start, but could use a lot of fixing up imo.

B+

I think the outfit is cute. I haven't seen this head/skin combo before and find it pretty attractive, the blush is a bit much but I like it. I don't mind the lashes. The septum piercing isn't going with the overall look, I would of not included it. You don't need any type of scaler that doesnt change overall look. For example, your thigh scalers are OK because you can visible see the thighs are bigger, but as far as a avatar shrink you can't tell anything from just a screenshot so it's not needed.

This is a good first submission, welcome to sedulity.

A-

I agree with Moo.

B+

i agree with imoo. also the head/skin is strange here and your lashes are glitching and not needed. also try a different shoe.

B

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          A- : Implex        : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1722           |
|          B  : Weeaboo       : Judge          |

Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1722.

Resub Granted

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Description: A lot of you mentioned the eyelashes, which were a bit off but i really couldn't find a fitting eyelashes for that face so i changed the face completely. What i was really going for a was like a classy outfit yet cute, like when you are just gonna hangout with your friends,i get the heels were a too much but i thought it looked cute with it so i kept it.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

 Rich64' PARADISO
byQihobyMahogany
444664

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

F| Mazie Black!!!**[S] No Eyeb[MT] Sky.Soho.EyHead Scaler [Hum The Beauty
byFinebysynamonnbyMissMayabyZaraKainebyMicole
641345499359988

Clothes

Top2 Duplicates1 Duplicate

~A: Natural'PullTc. PaisleyILouboutin Nude
bylllAdrianbyXiubyIZIS
730680660

Accessories

Facial JewelryActionsActionsMiscellaneousNew Acces.New Acces.

SUmmer Rose BlusLeg Thigh ScalerCombo Scaler S95Short Avi Size 9Babygirl|Brown eBeauty Mark
byIP0SHIbyScalerbyScalerbyVirtuallybyGangstalitioubyLovers
552399419420780565