Sedulity

January 5, 2015, 2:24 pm

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Outfit Items: View
Description: Simple, and not many accessories because they would either glitch, or over crowd this. I did add a ring though for something. I tried facial piercings but they weren't working.

Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar! eloise pale (n
bySinderellabyawkward
980444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Natalie BlackNo Eyebrows N/DeEyes Grey PerfecE. Mia Head + La
byFinebyRavenclawbyM0nysbyEci
641334499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

. on point [femmBlack Leggings SQuilted Platfor 
byZephyrbyLoversbymodell3d
598664664

Accessories

RingsActionsActionsCustom Shaped Nails

!R!Engagement RiHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler . perfect thick Sl Black Nails R
byRingsbyScalerbyScalerbyZephyrbylFloss
660399419665660

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Bluberries

January 5, 2015, 2:31 pm

I love the dystopian fashion kinda vibe here but I don't think the hair fits. It looks too done up for me? Plus it glitches pretty badly with the hood of the top. The leggings don't have much of a texture either.You could have done studs or something for accessories because the face looks a bit too plain.

B+

Frightful

January 5, 2015, 2:35 pm

I feel like this looks too much like a submission Ashlynn did a while back [www.imvuoutfits.com] . They just look too similar to me. I think a resub could help change this up, maybe try diferent pants or a different top, as well as a different skin maybe.

B+

iMoo

January 5, 2015, 2:37 pm

Agree with both.

B+

Choa

January 5, 2015, 2:48 pm

All is said. I really think this would look great if you played it up a bit more.

B+

McKinzey

January 5, 2015, 3:55 pm

You could maybe turn her into a ninja or something
i agree with what they said but i like this i do

B+

Weeaboo

January 5, 2015, 4:48 pm

alls been said! this is nice though

B+

Bunny

January 5, 2015, 5:04 pm

I like this a lot, nice and simple. I thing different hair would be nice though.

A-

Zeux

January 5, 2015, 6:47 pm

I agree with Che & Frightful.

B+

SedulityGrader8

January 5, 2015, 11:40 pm

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B+
88.33 %

6 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : AjakÂ Â Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMooÂ Â Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : MinahÂ Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : AshlynnÂ Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : WeeabooÂ Â  : Judge          |
|          A- : BunnyÂ Â Â Â  : 1Â Â Â Â           |
|          B+ : ZeuxÂ Â Â Â Â  : 836Â Â           |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 419.

ImperialOrder

January 6, 2015, 5:20 am

Resub Granted

EmeraldLagoon

January 6, 2015, 12:35 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: The bottoms had crappy texture, so I changed those. It's only similar to Ash's because well the tops are by the same developer, but they are still different. I changed the hair, added plugs and took off the ring.

Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Ash Avatar! ache [new body
bySinderellabyawkward
980444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

F| Stefanie Sun No Eyebrows N/DeEyes Grey PerfecScarla Head
byFinebyRavenclawbyM0nysbyM0nstre
639334499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

. on point [femm Acid Sweet DarkQuilted Platfor 
byZephyrbyEvesbymodell3d
598554664

Accessories

ActionsActionsEar PlugsCustom Shaped Nails

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler | Night Sky Tiny. perfect thick Sl Black Nails R
byScalerbyScalerby0BEYbyZephyrbylFloss
399419599665660

iMoo

January 6, 2015, 1:57 pm

Better.

A-

Zeux

January 6, 2015, 1:59 pm

I agree. This is better.

A-

McKinzey

January 6, 2015, 2:41 pm

Better i like the hair

A-