January 18, 2015, 4:40 pm
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January 19, 2015, 7:13 am
Hiiii!! I think this is your first submission so welcome to Sedulity!
You have few minor fixes but nothing very damaging. You are using a S95A115H65 scaler but in Sedulity it's very encouraged to use a S90A100H70, it helps the proportions look better. You've also left a voicebox, a dance, and a pose pack on. You need to take those off when you submit.
Clothing wise this is okay. I'm not very fond of the shoe duplicate and the dress doesn't have the best detail to it but I can look past that. For accessories though I don't feel like you really put too much thought in to it. The nails come with silver rings but you are wearing a gold necklace, in this manner gold and silver do not mix well. The hand tattoo is a bit random as well. I'd like to see a resub with porportions fixed and the actions taken off. this is a really good first submission though!
B+
You have few minor fixes but nothing very damaging. You are using a S95A115H65 scaler but in Sedulity it's very encouraged to use a S90A100H70, it helps the proportions look better. You've also left a voicebox, a dance, and a pose pack on. You need to take those off when you submit.
Clothing wise this is okay. I'm not very fond of the shoe duplicate and the dress doesn't have the best detail to it but I can look past that. For accessories though I don't feel like you really put too much thought in to it. The nails come with silver rings but you are wearing a gold necklace, in this manner gold and silver do not mix well. The hand tattoo is a bit random as well. I'd like to see a resub with porportions fixed and the actions taken off. this is a really good first submission though!
B+
January 19, 2015, 11:18 am
I agree with Minah.
I also don't think the necklace was needed, or maybe another one would work.
This necklace is just off the first few pages of the catalog. It's minor but it's nice to see accessories that we haven't seen before.
(Also the neckline of the dress is high enough that you don't need a necklace, but it does add a bit more.)
B+
I also don't think the necklace was needed, or maybe another one would work.
This necklace is just off the first few pages of the catalog. It's minor but it's nice to see accessories that we haven't seen before.
(Also the neckline of the dress is high enough that you don't need a necklace, but it does add a bit more.)
B+
January 19, 2015, 11:21 am
B+
88.33 %
4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Minah        : Judge | | B+ : Ajak         : Judge | | B+ : Adieliacerise : Judge | | B+ : iMoo         : Judge | | B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1807 |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1807.
January 23, 2015, 3:31 pm
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Description: I really didn't change anything, but i just added some accessorize and took of the actions and things but here it is.
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January 23, 2015, 8:29 pm
Firstly, you were supposed to change the name of the entire thread to "Submission 
[Resub]"
You didn't really take advice from any of the judges from your other submission...
you did change the nails with the silver rings which improved a bit, but you kept the same proportions, kept the shoe dup and the same necklace.
You did add a bracelet, but I think that bracelet is a little too much for this.
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[Resub]"
You didn't really take advice from any of the judges from your other submission...
you did change the nails with the silver rings which improved a bit, but you kept the same proportions, kept the shoe dup and the same necklace.
You did add a bracelet, but I think that bracelet is a little too much for this.
B