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Description: Atlas - 4AM










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

. Girl.! l o r d e [tan
byMessiahbyawkward
698444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Kamiisa WashP.Perfect No EyeCeleste VinoAllie Head
byMrsKittyby4000s_disablebylH20lbyM0nstre
663389444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Kirkwood Noir'leggings x meow RX // WANG Heels
byToriabyBlaisebyBlaise
6096331100

Accessories

ActionsDainty HandsEar PlugsWatchesChokersCustom Shaped 

Hand Scaler 70%~A: Black'Chic N{F} Plugs / SmalJ' Blackface Rol Ying Yangm| New Allie Eye
byScalerbylllAdrianalllbyFloodbyJamsbyPsicodelicbyMoonrise
399669499660559565

This could be better with some changes.
You have a black and silver necklace with a gold watch, it doesn't go well together.
Also at first I didn't get the pants, but I see cats. It seems rather random.
Also the texture of the pants aren't the greatest.
I think the shoes are completely out of place.
I am also iffy about the still avi with this.
I am not sure if you could pull it off with a resub.
But if you try for it, I really recommend trying to find some pants with with make the shoes go with this outfit a tad better.

B+

I agree with Emerald. The pants, while cute, are feeling a bit out of place here. The shoe texture is good but it feels so different from the rest of this look. Accessory wise you're all over the place with ying&yang then a gold watch. The skin is pretty but I'm also not feeling the lip color, it feels a bit random.

B+

Agree with both ladies here.

B+

I also agree with Emerald

B+

B+
88.33 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : Minah         : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : Ashlynn       : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: I took off the watch and I changed the jeans and the Avatar. I kept 2 particles of clothing the same.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Model! l o r d e [tan
byBrinebyawkward
707444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

|Kamiisa WashP.Perfect No EyeCeleste VinoAllie Head
byMrsKittyby4000s_disablebylH20lbyM0nstre
663389444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Kirkwood Noir'TG x Light DenimRX // WANG Heels
byToriabyTonybyBlaise
6096641100

Accessories

ActionsDainty HandsEar PlugsChokersCustom Shaped 

Hand Scaler 70%~A: Black'Chic N{F} Plugs / Smal Ying Yangm| New Allie Eye
byScalerbylllAdrianalllbyFloodbyPsicodelicbyMoonrise
399669499559565

I think this is MUCH better.
The shoes still don't exactly go, but with the rules, I think you did a fine job.

A-

This is much better, but I do think you could have found a black denim or even another black and white patterned pant that is a better quality. I feel like you played it too safe. The shoes could have used a shoe scaler, it's not HUGE but it is noticeable that your feet are larger than they should be. Not too bad!

B+

Agreed with Callie.

B+

Oh, I tried that. First, I was going around with my black and white collection and none of them really fit. Then, I tried to find some and none of those really fit. Then, I tried going around for some black jeans and none of those really fit. So I tried another colour, found a jean I liked, but it didn't come in a darker colour. (Well it did, but it was textured weird.) So I just left it alone. I also tried to remember all the mainly urban creators, but I was drawing up a blank. So I just posted this within the guidelines.

I'm still not sure on the accessory choice.
The pants bother me mostly because the texture looks copied and pasted.
I agree the shoes still look out of place, too.

B+