Description: I know this may not be favorable to most people and I know that two different versions of Fright's bathing suits have already been used, but I was bored so I started messing around and well....I loved it










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

DimonicaF| Ava - DeathP| never forget
byAutim_disablebyFinebyPiere
388554715

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Coal | Obaliell|J| No Eyebrows.n77 Crystal Eye Becka Head
byEverbyJoanxzbynikkabyEver
661349444954

Clothes

TopShoes

(   ) Watermelon FEV Chained Tip t
byFrightfulbyEV
665585

Accessories

Nails!!Music!!Ear PlugsActionsActionsBelly Piercing

black nailsFreckles| SugarCombo Scaler S95[Night] Hips+leg-P- Cruci Belly 
byMitnickbyShimisukaby0BEYbyScalerbyNightbyP4U
891609599419708559

EyeLashesNew Acces.Custom Shaped Necklaces

. realistic uppe[E]*Star Harness Brows | Black[E]*Black Heart 
byZephyrbyEpicErinbyEverbyEpicErin
745631664658

something seems a little off about the proportions and idk if is because the hips are large and the hair is short or if the head might be a bit too small. I don't agree with the choker and the star harness. It should be one or the other because it makes the chest area look super crowded. And I just don't like the anklets. They look out of place.

B+

Agree with above
This is much too crowded
The necklace doesnt fit with the harness
The shoulders are too big making the head look small
Agree about the anklets too
Also the plugs dont really match anything?

B+

Agree with both ladies.

B+

Agree with Ajak. I think the proportion thing is because the shoulders are still a bit broad so the make the head look small. You're improving so much though!! 8D


B+

xD you know whats funny, after I submitted this I was like "they aren't gonna like the plugs and chocker" but I had already submitted it and didn't know if i was allowed to change it. I used the 'anklet feet' because i had already used feet that were duplicates and I didn't want to over do it and I didn't know how you guys felt about dup feet. The shoulders being to small, i think that may have been because the resizer i used resized the shoulders, arms, and hands so maybe that had something to with it.


Thank you guys for the imput and so glad to know you think I am getting better Minah

Everything's been said

B+

All has been said.

B+

Try it link was removed.

F

How was the link removed o.0''' it was there when i posted this.........atleast I think it was.......

NOTICE: Even though 'Implex' has not posted a 'resub granted' post in this thread, I have been given permission to post a resub by the new group owner 'Choa'.....felt I should post that just in case xD



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Description: Old Description: I know this may not be favorable to most people and I know that two different versions of Fright's bathing suits have already been used, but I was bored so I started messing around and well....I loved it


Update for Re-submission: No idea why the try it button was removed from original post.....


Changes made:

1)More realistic Light blue eyes
2)Choker removed
3)Earrings removed
4)Head changed
5)Belly ring removed (mainly because I forgot to re-add it xD)
6)Anklet feet were changed to flip flops
7) Freckles were removed ( forgot to put them on again lol oh well)

Notice: Someone mentioned in one of my other posts that the blue eyes I use are unnaturally light.....but not all blue eyes are dark, if you have seen 'Lost Girl' then you should know the character 'Kenzi' who is portrayed by 'Kesnia Solo', her eyes are this shade of blue.....so this light blue IS a natural eye color....
Avatars & Skin

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Aurora Avatar TaF| Ava - DeathP| never forget
bySinderellabyFinebyPiere
2998554715

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Coal | Obaliell|J| No Eyebrows*MT* Bijoux - BlM| Allie Head
byEverbyJoanxzbyMissMayabyChoa
661349444987

Clothes

Top1 Duplicate

(�) Watermelon F Pvc Flip-Flops
byFrightfulbyPainyful
665619

Accessories

NailsActionsActionsNew Acces.Custom Shaped 

*MSL2*RealFrenchShoulder Scaler Avatar Hands Res[E]*Star Harness Brows | Black
byLittleMissChabyScalerbyMrsVanessaCitbyEpicErinbyEver
601419597664664

I feel like the arms are still too bare. The tattoos help, but there could still be more.

Overall decent.

A-

Great improvement from the original submission. I don't mind that she's bare because it's swimwear.

A

I like this! I think I would have liked it better with heels but that may be a bit personal.

A

A
94.38 %


2 judges have voted, the judge average was 95 % ( A )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : SinHaven : 1146           |
|          A  : iMoo     : Judge          |
|          A  : Choa     : Judge          |

Note: This submission was approved early;
Despite having just 2 judges, the probability of decline was 1.07 %.

1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 91.67 % ( A- ) with a rating weight of 1146.

lol Choa xD heels? Who wears heels to a beach


glad you guys like