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Description: Ok so....I went through as many pages and submissions as I could and I have taken what I have learned from all of them and made this :3. I tried really hard to find eyebrows and hairs that matched but this was the best I could do. I had originally planned on using a platinum version of this hair but I could not find any light eye brows that looked real but I found this version of the hair that is closer to the eyebrow color then any other. I also felt that maybe the platinum hair was to light for this skin and felt that the skin may have been a little to light for darker hair....so i tried to find a balance in the hair color (plus she already had black on....why over crowd her with more black....). I also decided to not use the choker I had originally planned to use due to her wearing the plugs....I felt she may have looked a little over crowded in the face and neck area. I also added a small beaded bracelet to her right wrist so she did not look to bare and chose things that you would likely see and wear at a beach. I didn't add the bracelet to her other wrist because its on her shoulder and it looked over crowded (and weird to me xD) I tried really hard D:










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

DimonicaAnarchy 2.0
byAutim_disablebyistrawberryki
388578

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

N Anna Cinderell|J| No Eyebrows Mild | Light Becka Head
byTrixRiderbyJoanxzbyEverbyEver
661349499954

Clothes

TopShoes

(���) Dark Famous Pvc Flip-Flops
byFrightfulbyPainyful
665619

Accessories

Dainty Hands!!Music!!ActionsActionsActionsEyeLashes

Small Hand BlackFrecklesShoulder Scaler Hand ScalerFeet Scaler. realistic uppe
byHandsbyShimisukabyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyZephyr
719609419598598745

BraceletsEar PlugsCustom Shaped 

Anchor Bracelet  Ear Plugs | Bla Cara Delevingne
byViolentFearbyEverbyEver
559466664

You're getting better but this still has a problem with the head looking a bit small and often times blonde hair looks better if the skin is lighter. It's pretty hard to make blonde hair look good with tan skin. It may have helped if the brows were a darker brown. I think 85% shoulder scaler is a bit too small.

B+

Agree with Minah.

B+

lol I knew that hair would throw me off x3 let me ask this though, I agree on the head and eye brows and now that I look closer the brows actually look like theres a tint of gray on them but how do i judge what size shoulder % to go to? I have a feeeling that her shoulders and head look to small because of her hips so should I have used a hip reduction or.....what? :3

Mostly its all about looking and being aware of whats going on. For the most part, me personally, I find that 90% should be the lowest you ever go with shoulders. If the head still looks small after wearing a 90% then it's because the person who made the head made it to be small. Other devs like Kloudust and Nikka are good though at keeping the head size normal though so you may want to try them.

: D thank you I shall try that ^-^

Everything was said.

B+

B+
88.33 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Minah         : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |

Can I get a resub please OwO

Resub Granted

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Description: Ok so for this resubmission, I changed the eyebrows and hair and made them both black, I also fixed the resizer for the shoulders and up'd it to 90% as well as fixed the head.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

DimonicaAnarchy 2.0
byAutim_disablebyistrawberryki
388578

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 cassidy night|J| No Eyebrows[MT] Sira Hazel ~E- Luscious Hea
byElfebyJoanxzbyMissMayabyEllohym
663349499589

Clothes

TopShoes

(�) Dark Famous Pvc Flip-Flops
byFrightfulbyPainyful
665619

Accessories

Nails!!Music!!ActionsActionsActionsEyeLashes

*MSL2*RealFrenchFrecklesShoulder Scaler Hand ScalerFeet Scaler. realistic lowe
byLittleMissChabyShimisukabyScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyZephyr
601609419598598506

EyeLashesBraceletsEar PlugsCustom Shaped 

. realistic uppeAnchor Bracelet  Ear Plugs | Bla Brows | Black
byZephyrbyViolentFearbyEverbyEver
745559466664

This submission needs to be put on hold until the results for Swimwear are in.

As long as Brian has granted a resub, it is fine to grade.
This is much better, but I am iffy about the hair with the hat and the eyes.

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ok may i ask why you are iffy on the eyes? The eyes are Hazel like mine so they are realistic....unless you mean that you dont think the hair and hat go with the eyes

This is better, but I'm also not really feeling the hair/hat. :l

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