Sedulity

March 22, 2015, 11:33 am

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Description: fresh look for the beach ( with wet bottom ) hope u ll like it

Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkinSkin

Velvet Avatar *MH* LineCover- Elana ~ Bronze
bySinderellabyWhiteDiamondbyWhiteDiamond
3998456444

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

Yasmino Pink[MT] Mesh.H Eyes Dia-MeshHead-Br
byCohobyMissMayabyWhiteDiamond
663499768

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

!E Geometry ColoD| Beachy butt v{SJ} Bare | Pink
byElegancybyDorocibyiSueJan
499524554

Accessories

ActionsActionsActionsFacial JewelryNails

Foot Shoe ScalerCombo Scaler S90Head Scaler 95%$ Nose Ring | bl{SJ} Sunset Esca
byScalerbyScalerbyScalerbyxSheylaabyiSueJan
3994194196982644

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Bluberries

March 22, 2015, 12:45 pm

The head scaler is unecessary. That 5% shrink really throws off the proportions. The hair seems a bit weird as well. Maybe if it was longer? The dark pink doesn't really go well with the skin you chose either.

B+

EmeraldLagoon

March 22, 2015, 12:49 pm

I agree with Ajak, also the nose ring is barely noticeable, so really isn't needed.
I also don't think the bottoms are very nice looking.
They are ugly, imo. Like, such a nice top, and then why those bottoms...?
It makes her look like she's got a little extra junk down in that area.
The bottoms really take away from this.

B+

iMoo

March 22, 2015, 1:03 pm

All's been said.

B+

Yukikira

March 22, 2015, 1:44 pm

All has been said

B+

Frightful

March 22, 2015, 3:07 pm

Agreed with Emerald and Ajak

B+

LYDIANN16

March 22, 2015, 3:13 pm

All has been said

B

SedulityGrader14

March 22, 2015, 4:10 pm

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B+
87.86 %

4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : AjakÂ Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMooÂ Â Â Â Â Â Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          B+ : YukikiraÂ Â Â Â Â  : 138Â Â           |
|          B+ : FrightfulÂ Â Â Â  : Judge          |
|          BÂ  : LYDIANN16Â Â Â Â  : 1672Â           |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 85.25 % ( B ) with an average rating weight of 905.

ImperialOrder

March 23, 2015, 5:54 am

Resub Granted

Umbriiel

March 26, 2015, 5:50 am

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Description: Umm.. well this time i ve changed the hair style and color so it matches well with her skin and of course the bottom. i ve added the sarong and the earrings so she won't look tha bare

Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Velvet Avatar Elana ~ Bronze
bySinderellabyWhiteDiamond
3998444

Head & Face

HairEyesHead

|Graciela Honey[MT] Mesh.H Eyes Dia-MeshHead-Br
byMrsKittybyMissMayabyWhiteDiamond
663499768

Clothes

TopBottomBottomShoes

!E Geometry ColoCoralDottedSaron*W* Addi Shorts {SJ} Bare | Pink
byElegancybyCrazyCherryApbyWhimsbyiSueJan
499750591554

Accessories

ActionsActionsEarringsNails

Foot Shoe ScalerCombo Scaler S90*W* DJ Earrings{SJ} Sunset Esca
byScalerbyScalerbyWhimsbyiSueJan
3994195972644

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iMoo

April 1, 2015, 2:13 pm

Good improvement.
Wish she didn't look so angry..

A

Frightful

April 4, 2015, 12:08 pm

This resub is on hold until Swimwear results are posted.

iMoo

April 11, 2015, 2:00 am

Bump. Swimwear results were posted.

Choa

April 11, 2015, 3:30 pm

I like this a lot better. I'm not so sure on the sarong but it's still an improvement.

A-