March 29, 2015, 5:26 pm

Outfit Items: View
Description: Hope this one is just as good or better than the other submission, aside from the accidental banned outfit. Took the pleasure of googling other appearances for Burlesque ladies. Can't wait to see how this will be graded. ^^
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Ash Avatar
::mai::KayraSuns
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Sinderella
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Milara
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612
Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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[]-Hyland2 Caff
[N] No Brows
F| Natural Hazel
E. Mia Head + La
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Beaty
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Naive
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Fine
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Eci
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349
478
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Clothes
TopBottom
Shoes
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![CLR] Gina Crop
[W] High| Pant L
[M] Venca.Shoes
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Cleire
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Watch
by
MissMaya
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609
636
Accessories
ActionsActions
Actions
Necklaces
Bracelets
Bracelets
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Head Resizer* Sm
Hands Scaler
Shoulder Scaler
[MT] Lariat Neck
[MT] Genna Brace
[MT] Genna Brace
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Mara2oXlll_di
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Scaler
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Scaler
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MissMaya
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MissMaya
by
MissMaya
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444
598
598
581
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580
Microphones
Dainty Hands
Face Paint
New Acces.
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ICO Microphone F
[MT] Lyria . Man
[]-Caff Brows
. Beauty Mark
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LOL
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MissMaya
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Beaty
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Yeoo
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Image Edit*
March 30, 2015, 1:19 pm
I think you were trying to do Burlesque from a modern angle but I'm not seeing Burlesque here much at all. Burlesque's signature thing is a corset or extremely decorated clothing articles and this is too plain. The leg lace is poorly textured and you used a lot of accessories by MissMaya, try to add more variety in devs unless you are doing a bundle. I also get you were trying to use the microphone to portray the entertainer aspect but it still just doesn't fit in with Burlesque.
B+
B+
March 30, 2015, 2:07 pm
Agree with Choa.
(Just realized I've still been calling you Minah. xD)
B+
(Just realized I've still been calling you Minah. xD)
B+
March 31, 2015, 5:08 am
I agree this is more modern, would been fine had the theme not been Burlesque
B+
B+
March 31, 2015, 3:20 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Choa     : 1140 | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : Implex   : Judge | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : 1675 |
Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1408.