May 5, 2015, 6:48 pm

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May 5, 2015, 9:08 pm
I feel like there's not enough breaking up the black in this. Bags aside (because I really DON'T think you can count shopping bags) you have a black dress with a black coat and black shoes. There are no studs. No jewelry. No little details that break the monotony. I'd like to see something not black, and some better textured shoes, in the meantime.
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May 5, 2015, 9:51 pm
I would have liked to see a color pop here. Red lips or somethin.
The coat is alright, I just personally dislike it with the dress.
The black on black is alright imo; tons of submissions with all black are passed all the time. But it WOULD look better with a color pop or some accessories like Sin pointed out.
I feel like you could have done more with this...
B+
The coat is alright, I just personally dislike it with the dress.
The black on black is alright imo; tons of submissions with all black are passed all the time. But it WOULD look better with a color pop or some accessories like Sin pointed out.
I feel like you could have done more with this...
B+
May 8, 2015, 1:08 pm
It's like, shopping bags from expensive stores, and a fur coat. Is she supposed to look like 1 million dollars? Because I don't get that from this look.
It's lacking. I don't mind the black on black, but this could use some more.
I do agree about the red lipstick idea.
And it might be a good idea to ditch the fur coat.
There is a dup on it, and it's been less than a month since it was used. I think it's too early to have this coat on the site again.
Even though the ideas are completely different, it's a tad bit too soon to have the same coat on the side.
Also a different shoes style would be nice.
I don't think these freshen up the look any.
Also, I am iffy about the hair. If you added a fancy pony, or up do it would add some sass to this and add to the million dollar look.
And if you take off the jacket, make sure to add a bracelet. A simple, but expensive looking one. It's not too much, but it adds to the look.
If you do decide to keep the jacket, add some earrings and a ring. (Which should be done with whatever you do.)
Make her look sassy and like a million bucks. This is a good start though.
B+
It's lacking. I don't mind the black on black, but this could use some more.
I do agree about the red lipstick idea.
And it might be a good idea to ditch the fur coat.
There is a dup on it, and it's been less than a month since it was used. I think it's too early to have this coat on the site again.
Even though the ideas are completely different, it's a tad bit too soon to have the same coat on the side.
Also a different shoes style would be nice.
I don't think these freshen up the look any.
Also, I am iffy about the hair. If you added a fancy pony, or up do it would add some sass to this and add to the million dollar look.
And if you take off the jacket, make sure to add a bracelet. A simple, but expensive looking one. It's not too much, but it adds to the look.
If you do decide to keep the jacket, add some earrings and a ring. (Which should be done with whatever you do.)
Make her look sassy and like a million bucks. This is a good start though.
B+
May 13, 2015, 8:55 pm
ahh i agree about the color pop but i acutally really like this skin/lips/makeup/head THING LOL i think its really pretty and unique ;-; maybe just colored shoes with colored jewelery? cause i also dont really mind the black on black x)
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B+
May 13, 2015, 10:40 pm

B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : SinHaven     : 1332 | | B+ : iMoo         : Judge | | B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge | | B+ : Weeaboo      : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1332.