Outfit Items: View
Description: ......Monochrome.....



I need some help, I could not for the life of me find eyes that worked for this look, I tried dark blue/green, light blue/green....I didn't want to use white eyes because I wanted natural non blind color eyes.....and I did not like the way Hazel and Brown eyes looked, maybe someone can find eyes or give a suggestion on eyes for me? I also feel shes missing something but I am not sure as to what....


I feel like you guys may not like the skin but personally I fell in love with it and have been dying to use it in a submission....lets hope this was the right one.



Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Aurora Avatar TaM��� Mad Maxie
bySinderellabyMyjrn
2998499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

���Oliva Haven|J| No Eyebrows*MT* Bijoux - BlM| Allie Head
bySinHavenbyJoanxzbyMissMayabyChoa
718349444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

[Anry] Karena V2[Anry] Delit Leg[Anry] Kazey Sho
byAnrybyAnrybyAnry
664642686

Accessories

ActionsActionsActionsBody PiercingsFacial JewelryBracelets

Hand Scaler 77.5Shoulder Scaler [Night] Hips+legChest: 001TALCUM . Facial #P - Manchu Armb
byScalerbyScalerbyNightbyTilabyShenzibyPlaztique
399419708530664580

EarringsDainty HandsCustom Shaped New Acces.

(F) PVC EARRINGS.L. Rings + Nail Brows | Black(���) Angel Bites
byooFLAVISoobyLollirotbyEverbyFrightful
679665664499

9) Bundle outfits must have 2 additional items by the same developer that are separate from the 3 used in rule 6.

F

F
50 %


1 judge have voted, the judge average was 50 % ( F )

Grading Breakdown:

|          F  : Frightful : Judge          |

Note: This submission was declined early because it has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com]. You must message staff to be granted a resub.

Oooooo so for a bundle I need 5 items by the same dev right? See I removed two other accessories I had by Anry thinking I had to many Anry products even for a bundle xDDDD

Thanks fright for letting me know! I am still trying to understand the bundle thing......

Resub please x3

>3 I like you hair, dow.

The simplest think I can say to help understand bundles are:

Hair+top+bottom+ two other products all by the same dev = bundle

Top+bottom+shoes+ two other products all by the same dev = bundle


Resub Granted

XD I didn't even realize it was your hair, I love it too, I have like 4 of your hairs on my wl, they are gorgeous especially the black/blue ones O_O.


Omg Choa that actually does help....like a lot....Ty

Outfit Items: View
Description: Old Description: ......Monochrome.....

I need some help, I could not for the life of me find eyes that worked for this look, I tried dark blue/green, light blue/green....I didn't want to use white eyes because I wanted natural non blind color eyes.....and I did not like the way Hazel and Brown eyes looked, maybe someone can find eyes or give a suggestion on eyes for me? I also feel shes missing something but I am not sure as to what....

I feel like you guys may not like the skin but personally I fell in love with it and have been dying to use it in a submission....lets hope this was the right one.

New Description

Things Changed:

1) Added 2 bracelets by Anry
2) Changed the nails from white to black, the white version has been bothering me since I posted the first submission of this look....


I think using both bracelets may have been over kill? I thought about using a belly ring and opting for one bracelet but that looked odd, then I thought about a necklace and belly ring instead of the bracelets but feel that not only looked odd but made the face feel heavy :/

I hope you guys like this and I hope its right....
Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Aurora Avatar TaM� Mad Maxie
bySinderellabyMyjrn
2998499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

�Oliva Haven|J| No Eyebrows*MT* Bijoux - BlM| Allie Head
bySinHavenbyJoanxzbyMissMayabyChoa
718349444987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

[Anry] Karena V2[Anry] Delit Leg[Anry] Kazey Sho
byAnrybyAnrybyAnry
664642686

Accessories

ActionsActionsActionsBody PiercingsFacial JewelryEarrings

Hand Scaler 77.5Shoulder Scaler [Night] Hips+legChest: 001TALCUM . Facial (F) PVC EARRINGS
byScalerbyScalerbyNightbyTilabyShenzibyooFLAVISoo
399419708530664679

Dainty HandsCustom Shaped Spice GlassesNew Acces.Bracelets

.L. Rings + Nail Brows | Black[Anry] Kersy R A(�) Angel Bites[Anry] Odas L Ar
byLollirotbyEverbyAnrybyFrightfulbyAnry
665664664499664

I'm really not a fan of these pants.
They are sexy yet with the bottom fluffy part look girly.
I think booty shorts would have been hot here.
The arm with the like 10 bracelets is rather too much.
The other arm is fine, and I don't think the other one needed any bracelets.
Maybe one would have been fine.
I think a choker or necklace would have been better other than the chest piercings, and I know Anry has sexy necklaces/chokers.
The monroe must be a personally thing, but it doesn't really go here. It's distracting, and the skin is cool with the makeup, and the monroes are too much for the face.
The lip piercings are fine, but the spectum attached to it glitched with the head.
I am really iffy about the earrings. They aren't bad, but I dunno.
If you found studs or something, they wouldn't be bad.
I think a resub would be nice. Others may not.
This has a lot of potential, and I really like the monochromatic theme. And I do like the makeup.
Head/skin combo isn't bad either.
If you end up resubing, it is up to you if you want to change the pants to booty shorts or what.

B+

I actually don't have any issues with this. Not necessarily something I would wear...but nothing that stands out as being wrong, or bad, to me.

A

I actually don't mind the piercings. I like this look, it's different.

A

Honestly I cant stand the skin
Im sorry but I cant see how it fits and no matter how hard I try to like it I cant
So im just gonna pretend its not there XD
The only real issue I see is the bunch of bracelets on the left arm

A-

@Lyd - lmao xD yea I wanted to use this skin so bad but never was able to use it right, I can't decide what type of look the skin would be good for :O

I could see it in futuristic.
Honestly the only reason why I dislike it is because its used sooooooooo much in modeling groups and sometimes its used with normal everyday clothing as if it was any other skin
You know how sometimes the radio plays the same song so many times after a while you begin to hate it?
That's kinda how I feel about about it XD

LOL XD is it really used that much xD

I agree with Lyd about the bracelets, though I think this was a good improvement overall. :q

A-