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Description: I made a hanbok.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Kid Cutie  Avi. delayss | REQ
byAffibyZephyr
697444

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHeadHead

|Ola Black((n) KD black brStudio photo sho[SIN] Head ScaleKD^ERIN HEAD
byMrsKittybynutsbarbysxettbySinderellabykloudust
663498554378877

Clothes

TopShoes

/Y/ Royal Flames. realistic bare
byMairobyZephyr
999554

Accessories

RosesSpice GlassesActionsDainty Hands1st True New H

Rose Breastpin -'S|| Dhalia OranSmall Waist, Lon/Y/ Natural Hand|LZ|Yakona Headd
byLovedWarriorbyDannabyAnarchbyMairobyLunalyiZelet
694829698664622

The dress I REALLY poorly textured and the bottom is choppy , and the eyes were a but to foggy, everything else is really good but the dress just throws it all off.

B+

This is actually one of the better textered hanbock dresses I have seen, but the 'design?' on it needs a bit of work. Hanbock dresses are flashy with elaberate designs and this just isn't um....up to par with real hanbocks. Im not sure if choosing a different hair would have made a difference with the flowers but I wish they weren't sucken into the hair. The eyes look a little ghoolish to me and the waist/hip resizer is unneeded because they are both covered by the dress.


While it does have its flaws, I do still really like this, a resub is unneccessary because for a resub 2 of three clothing items must remain so she cant change the dress, and the other flaws are very minor in my opinion to not warrent a resub as it is only the hair and eyes that really bug me aside from the unneeded hip/waist scaler.


A-

High quality ethnic clothing are very hard to come by so I can understand using the dress even with the low quality
I like the flowers on the head but the breast pin seems like it doesnt fit in

A-

I get that clothing like this is hard to find of quality, but it is really lacking here. The top part of the dress isn't bad, but the bottom part is blurry. Everything else is good.
I wish there was a way around the bad texture.
Since the dress is a major part of the outfit, it's ehh.
The top part is beautiful, and if it were only one clothing item that could be changed out, and wasn't terrible, I would pass this.
As seeing you are the creator of this dress, I hope you don't take the comments about the dress to heart.
The only way to resub this would be is if you worked on the texture of the bottom half of this dress.
Another minor thing, I don't see the child avi being needed as she's not a child.
Sorry hun.

B+

I agree with Emerald.
I know I had graded another submission that was like this one. The girl herself is beautiful, the head and all, but the quality of the outfit is reeeally hard to pull off. And maybe it could if the proportioning didn't look a little wonky to me. It might be because of the avi, but the torso on this avi looks really awks.

B+

I think the problem is mainly because the bow is 2D drawn on and not 3D like you get with Kimono's on here. The texturing and details is fine on the top, maybe lacking a bit on the bottom, but I feel the downfall was the 2D bow. I know you probably worked super hard on this and I MORE than appreciate it since I absolutely adore Korean culture and all the multiple styles and designs for Hanboks. IMVU really needs a lot more of them.

Everything else you have is beautiful though. I wish the avi were a bit more happy or neutral in the face though. In order for this to have a successful resub you'd need to add more detailing and maybe look in to adding a bow somehow on top of the Hanbok's ribbon. I really appreciate you making a hanbok though, it's exciting.

B+

B+
89.22 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : MorbidAngst   : 1101           |
|          A- : Yukikira      : 1409           |
|          A- : LYDIANN16     : 1707           |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : Choa          : Judge          |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 90.8 % ( A- ) with an average rating weight of 1406.

Resub Granted