May 22, 2015, 9:33 pm
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Description: Simplicity.
I picked pearls because they are simple, and silver seemed like too much.
And I would have picked a long necklace for this look, but I didn't like anything and what I did like glitched. And the neckline is high, sooo..
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May 22, 2015, 11:58 pm
This is cute but I'm not so sure on the textures on the top and bottom. They're both copy and pasted looking, and don't have the best textures. I'm also confused on if this is supposed to be casual or not since you added pearls and pearls aren't exactly casual. Her shoulders also seem a bit too big, I think a 90% scaler would have worked better. I also feel like the top and bottom are part of two completely different outfits. The top is more dressy looking, while the jeans are ripped. I'd like to see a resub to make this outfit fit more.
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B+
May 23, 2015, 12:07 am
I agree with Fright about the top and bottom looking odd together. I think you could do something nice if you switched out the top and lost the pearls. Of course I agree about the shoulders too. The avi might also be a part of the reason why they look wide, and the stance is kinda awks with the top's mesh imo.
But yeah, I think a resub would be nice, just to make this a little more casual and see where you take it.
B+
But yeah, I think a resub would be nice, just to make this a little more casual and see where you take it.
B+
May 23, 2015, 6:33 am
The shoulders arent big. I had a 90 on. If i left it in you would all complain they were too small. It may be the avi, but even 90% with this avi looked awkward, same with other avis.
And for the pearls... people do wear pearls with casual clothing. That's why I only kept it to a very minimal bracelet and ring.
[enlightenme.com]
On pinterest there is a person wearing overall jean shorts with a pearl necklace.
And for the pearls... people do wear pearls with casual clothing. That's why I only kept it to a very minimal bracelet and ring.
[enlightenme.com]
On pinterest there is a person wearing overall jean shorts with a pearl necklace.
May 23, 2015, 9:18 am
I grew up in the south where pearls are only worn if someone died or someone is getting married or you're going to church. Pearls are not casual.
May 23, 2015, 9:27 am
The pearls do not fit with this submission at all. And This pants doesn't go with this top at all. The top feels too classy for this.
B+
B+
May 24, 2015, 12:33 pm
I agree on the pearls being a bit out of place. A shoe change might help get this away from casual and more to chic. I'm not sure if it's the head or hair but the forehead seems a bit big. The skin is pretty but it has an odd undertone here. The texture on the pearl bracelet is not the best either.
B+
B+
May 25, 2015, 1:27 pm
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : peachilla : 951  | | B+ : Choa     : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 951.
July 18, 2015, 9:40 am
B+
88.33 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge | | B+ : peachilla : 1006 | | B+ : Choa     : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with a rating weight of 1006.
July 18, 2015, 10:07 am
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Description: Dups are from my declined outfit. I changed the shoes to make this more chic. Also I changed the pearls to silver, not because they can't be casual, since that is about beliefs, but I wasn't searching forever to find better looking pearls.
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July 19, 2015, 12:45 am
I like this so much better. I'm not so crazy on the skin still especially with this head, she looks a tad young and I think the avi is also messing with that a bit.
A-
A-
July 19, 2015, 12:18 pm
Still not a fan of the top and bottoms together, I don't really know why the shoes were changed when the main issue was the top and bottoms together, your best bet would have been to change the top or bottoms. I agree with Bri on the head/skin, it's a bit odd looking, I don't why I didn't notice it before. Moonrise skins are hard to pull off and look better with a more mature head.
B+
B+
July 19, 2015, 8:50 pm
B+
89.44 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : Choa     : Judge | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge |
July 20, 2015, 9:30 pm
B+
89.44 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.44 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : Choa     : Judge | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : iMoo     : Judge |
July 20, 2015, 9:36 pm
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Description: Still trying to get used to my new mac book pro. Downloaded the client on here and lost my shadowless room as default shop mode. (Ive had it since I lost my vip) And graphics are so different on here than my old pc.
Anyways, I changed the skin and avi, to give her a more mature look. I didn't change the top/bottoms since it seems to be more of a personal preference. I might go back to my pc for all imvu purposes. x.x I upload this image and it looks horrible on here. Stupid retina display.
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July 24, 2015, 2:01 pm
The top or the bottom needs to be changed
the top is to dressy for the casual shorts
i personally don't like them having duplicates
i think the hair color is bland
B
the top is to dressy for the casual shorts
i personally don't like them having duplicates
i think the hair color is bland
B
July 24, 2015, 3:49 pm
You're downgrading because there are dups? When if you checked the dups, you would clearly see that it's from the declined outfit of this, in the declined section. You're a judge, you should know to check the dups and not just see them and say "I personally don't like them having dups" and downgrading for no reason?
July 24, 2015, 4:03 pm
I agree with Ash about the top being a little dressy for the shorts simply because they're frayed at the bottom.
Other than that, the minor changes make this look a lot better than the other two you've submitted imo.
A-
Other than that, the minor changes make this look a lot better than the other two you've submitted imo.
A-
July 24, 2015, 6:00 pm
Please keep drama out of threads, I will delete anymore comments that are not grades.
July 25, 2015, 9:31 am
I like the outfit, not so much a fan of the head/skin combo.
A-
A-
July 25, 2015, 12:33 pm
You still aren't really listening to your critiques. The top and bottom were suggested to be changed in the original submission, and judges and members still want it changed. I also agree with Brian on the head/skin combo, the skin isn't the best and seems a bit dated. For future resubs and submissions, please listen to your critiques, it will keep you from getting so many declines.
B
B
July 25, 2015, 12:40 pm
B+
87.99 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B : Ashlynn      : Judge | | A- : blackdiamxnds : 1558 | | A- : Implex       : Judge | | B : Frightful    : Judge |
Note: 1 member review was taken into account;
Their grade was 91.67 % ( A- ) with a rating weight of 1558.
June 10, 2017, 2:21 pm
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Description: I know there's dups, but they are from a revamp from this outfit. I talked to iMoo about it, and she said that my outfit should be fine.
I think using light colored pants makes it different.
I changed the pants, skin, head, hair, avi, eyebrows, and added a necklace.
I hope you guys let the dups slide since they are a revamp of this outfit.
The revamp used darker, torn pants and the pearl acc.
I think it looks different than the revamp.
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June 10, 2017, 3:07 pm
I think your look is different enough, they are somewhat similar so just be careful about that in the future. My only complaint is that the eyes, the way they're made, they're just a bit too big for this head and give her an almost anime type look.
A-
A-
June 11, 2017, 1:03 am
17) 2 clothing products must remain from original submission.
Also, i thought the maxium attempts are 3?
F
Also, i thought the maxium attempts are 3?
F
June 11, 2017, 1:30 am
C-
70.84 %
2 judges have voted, the judge average was 70.84 % ( C- )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : Frightful : Judge | | F : Pjush    : Judge |
Note: This submission was declined early;
This submission has broken a rule listed at [www.imvu.com].
You must message staff to be granted a resub.
June 11, 2017, 4:48 pm
Crap I forgot about that rule. The original had different shoes, I didn't realize. And if the max attempts were three I don't think iMoo would have granted a resub? Can I get a resub on this again to change the shoes back to the origin?
June 11, 2017, 6:04 pm
The maximum attempt at resubs was 3, I'm not sure if that was changed or not
June 11, 2017, 8:11 pm
It's still part of the rules, but I still had resubed twice, and I was still granted a resub. Maybe iMoo just didn't pay attention? One reason this got failed is because I forgot that the shoes were different from the original. Maybe I should just do a revamp. Use a similar shirt with no dups, and similar shoes with no dups and pretty much call it good. I just was hoping to get one declined off the ranks. And come back to this cute outfit and re-do it.
June 11, 2017, 10:50 pm
That's my bad; I wasn't paying attention when I granted that last resub and missed the number of pages on it. But yeah, a revamp is probably in your best interest after all.