Outfit Items: View
Description: Black and yellow.
I tried a new skin, sorta iffy on it, yet I still like it.









Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN]  Aurora St::mai::IvyMidday
bySinderellabyMilara
698612

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

E* Sandra DuskNo Eyebrows N/DeE* Blue CrystalScarla Head
byEmeraldLagoonbyRavenclawbyEmeraldLagoonbyM0nstre
661334499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

 long top bYellowPinupLeggs Suede.
byBwiebyDexybyXiu
669598640

Accessories

BraceletsActionsActionsNailsCustom Shaped Rings

(XL)Yellow TourmHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler  | Yellow nails. perfect thick Julia Ring Black
byXoralinebyScalerbyScalerbyHomewindbyZephyrbyIISandyII
669399419561665650

I don't really think this hair goes well with this look, it's a bit too sleek for this and the color actually kind of clashes with the yellow oddly enough. A hair with a bit more body to it would fit this look a lot better. A more natural color would look better as well. Something in the face area is throwing me off as well, I'm not really sure what it is. Maybe try a different head? I don't really think this one is mature enough for this type of look. I also think the yellow bracelet was a bit overkill on the yellow, I think the pants and nails were plenty, try a silver or black bracelet instead.

B+

I agree with Fright. Your hands also look a little small--could be the nails doing that.
This is a really nice concept though.. I like the top/bottoms/shoes.

B+

Agree with above
I dont see how the bracelet ties in besides the color
I think a plain black one would have been better

B+

i wouldnt of minded the hair color if the pants weren't yellow, but since they are yellow, i think you should of gone for a solid natural color (not grey i know its natural xD)

agree with lydian about the bracelet as well. i think it should be black too.

B+

B+
88.33 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Frightful : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge          |

Resub Granted

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Description: Dups are from my declined outfit. I changed the pants, bracelet, and nails, and hair. I decided to go with all black. I dunno why, but I didn't really like the black and yellow idea anymore. Edit to add that I changed the skin as well.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

[SIN]  Aurora St esme - b
bySinderellabyElfe
698609

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

! Shiori blackNo Eyebrows N/DeE* Blue CrystalScarla Head
byJavabyRavenclawbyEmeraldLagoonbyM0nstre
608334499987

Clothes

1 DuplicateBottom1 Duplicate

 long top bNoirPinupLeggs Suede.
byBwiebyDexybyXiu
669598640

Accessories

BraceletsActionsActionsCustom Shaped Dainty HandsRings

[X]BlackPearl BrHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler . perfect thick .Cst: Oil (shortJulia Ring Black
byIXIbyScalerbyScalerbyZephyrbyDashingbyIISandyII
699399419665698650

I want this.

A+

No complaints

A