May 26, 2015, 4:03 pm
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Description: Oml, the number of times I had to switch shoes to avoid another dup was just ridiculous.
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May 26, 2015, 4:08 pm
I think this is cute but the jeans are a bit informal for the top and the head is REALLY shiny, and the lips seem a bit out of place, perhaps a more ombre color?
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May 26, 2015, 4:29 pm
I'm not a fan of the add on lips. They look odd.
Also, they don't cover the lips of the skin completely.
I agree on the pants being a bit more informal.
But the dup on them, it's actually a really similar outfit.
Black heels, and a crop top look.
And the pants were used less than a month ago.
The top, the lace is fuzzy in a few parts but I think that is minor.
I think a pvc high waisted skirt would look sexy with this outfit.
This is a good start, but with the dup to the pants, it's too similar to the first one.
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Also, they don't cover the lips of the skin completely.
I agree on the pants being a bit more informal.
But the dup on them, it's actually a really similar outfit.
Black heels, and a crop top look.
And the pants were used less than a month ago.
The top, the lace is fuzzy in a few parts but I think that is minor.
I think a pvc high waisted skirt would look sexy with this outfit.
This is a good start, but with the dup to the pants, it's too similar to the first one.
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May 26, 2015, 4:31 pm
It's not the skin, it's the shape of the lips themselves. But I just noticed that. x-x;
And just because the other outfit is black doesn't mean it's similar..this one's more semi-formal ish with the top. But I agree about the rest.
And just because the other outfit is black doesn't mean it's similar..this one's more semi-formal ish with the top. But I agree about the rest.
May 26, 2015, 6:56 pm
I dont care about the dup since really they're just black pants in the end
I do agree a more formal bottom would have been better
I dont really like this head/skin combo though, there way some parts are highlighted seems odd and misplaced
agree on the lips not fitting but i actually like the color
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I do agree a more formal bottom would have been better
I dont really like this head/skin combo though, there way some parts are highlighted seems odd and misplaced
agree on the lips not fitting but i actually like the color
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May 27, 2015, 6:18 am
I agree with Emerald, the dup is just a tad too similar. I'm also not sure on the hair either, the hairline is usually fine for MrsKitty hairs but this one is a bit noticeably too boxed at the hairline. The layerable lips are also a bit messy for this look too.
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May 30, 2015, 7:40 pm
B+
87.84 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : MorbidAngst  : 1116 | | B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1832 | | B+ : LYDIANN16    : Judge | | B+ : Choa         : Judge | | B : Purversity   : 1813 | | B+ : Weeaboo      : Judge |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 87.06 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1587.
June 11, 2015, 2:12 am
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Description: So after spending roughly 3 days off and on looking for a good skirt and even some belts, the struggle was aggravating and I opted to change the top. I changed the skin, hair, and accessories to give it a different feel from before too. So hopefully this is an improvement for you guys.
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June 11, 2015, 12:28 pm
This is cute in a casual chic kinda way.
I'm on my phone, so I don't actually know the shades match up, but for me it looks good.
I'm not a huge fan of that bracelet with this and I don't like the way the avatar makes her look.
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I'm on my phone, so I don't actually know the shades match up, but for me it looks good.
I'm not a huge fan of that bracelet with this and I don't like the way the avatar makes her look.
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June 11, 2015, 12:50 pm
The avatar messes with her shoulders, warping them a bit so they look almost sloped. Now that you changed the top, the pants look out of place. Jeans don't really go with a top like that, more dressy pants, or a skirt would look better. The lips are a nice pop of color but they look random because there's nothing really tieing them in. You don't have a shoulder scaler, which would probably help here.
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June 11, 2015, 1:03 pm
Crap. I totally had a shoulder scaler and didn't notice it was knocked off.
June 11, 2015, 1:21 pm
TL;DR - Wide hips look weird with the slump shoulder, the pants should have been changed in the original for everything else would have went with it, I like the change in the head and skin just wish you kept the lip red (if the pants were changed because a red lip could have been dressy). Still not feelin it personally, but I do like everything else you changed, much more flattering.
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June 11, 2015, 8:37 pm
???? i felt like everyone was complaining about the pants but you changed the top????
i do like this top better, but i'm still not a fan of the pants LOL; agreed with everyone else
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i do like this top better, but i'm still not a fan of the pants LOL; agreed with everyone else
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June 11, 2015, 10:00 pm
I said in the description why I didn't change the pants. Choa advised me to change the top and whatnot if I couldn't find bottoms I liked. :l
June 11, 2015, 10:29 pm
Then I would have made sure the top went with the pants instead rather than going for a different style of lace, though this lace is better textured. Ornate lace tends to dress up an outfit unless it has a crochet or something. And looking deeper the black in the top would be really hard to match with the rest of the outfit, it is not the best texture quality if you stare at it long enough. So I do feel you there, but if you keep the pants, make sure the pants work... but at the same time a lot will have to be changed from the original to do so. You already changed the accessories, and if the top changes the shoes gotta change and then its almost a whole new outfit.
A skirt was just a thing that could go with it, to get that idea of something a bit more dressy. Maybe even use that red from the lip and find a red skirt, change the shoes around and small adjustments to the accessories. Or to avoid skirts a high waisted pant (because it is a crop top) could go with this aswell and they are easier to find in that black.
But yeah tried finding specifically a black skirt and it was not going well for me either, i for sure see the struggle.
I must have got the descriptions confused or something being I missed when the original was posted but I totally missed that comment myself personally, sorries.
A skirt was just a thing that could go with it, to get that idea of something a bit more dressy. Maybe even use that red from the lip and find a red skirt, change the shoes around and small adjustments to the accessories. Or to avoid skirts a high waisted pant (because it is a crop top) could go with this aswell and they are easier to find in that black.
But yeah tried finding specifically a black skirt and it was not going well for me either, i for sure see the struggle.
I must have got the descriptions confused or something being I missed when the original was posted but I totally missed that comment myself personally, sorries.
June 17, 2015, 11:49 pm
Agree with Fright and Ouijah
I get why you changed the top, but I agree that now it seems like the top part is one part of one outfit and the bottom is part of another.
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I get why you changed the top, but I agree that now it seems like the top part is one part of one outfit and the bottom is part of another.
B+
June 18, 2015, 10:06 am
I don't completely hate the pants but now the top and everything else looks too dressy for it so I agree with ouijah and the rest, it's a shame though thought the first one was a bit better. Agree with avi part too. :C
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June 18, 2015, 7:37 pm
B+
88.81 %
3 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : Purversity : 1795 | | B+ : Frightful : Judge | | B+ : Ouijah    : 1573 | | B+ : Weeaboo   : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge | | B+ : Nerves    : 1724 |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.51 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1697.
May 8, 2016, 3:23 pm
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Description: Well I figured it wouldn't hurt if I tried. I was dumb for not thinking about changing direction with this completely the first time.
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May 9, 2016, 10:06 am
Very much better! I think it would be better if you are wearing a silver bracelet since there is silver rings but minorrrrr.
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