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Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Av. Classic perf+ reaper pale p/
byM0nysbySomeone
499554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

M' Pastel Goth M[MT] No Brows! skyline beauty head
byM0nysbyMissMayabyElfebyElfe
660389444965

Clothes

TopShoes

Goth Full OutfitGoth Heels
byChloeDrakebyOdorlessSmell
639750

Accessories

NecklacesBeauty MarksActionsActionsCustom Shaped Face Paint

Black Gothic ChoF| Beauty MarkHand Scaler 70%Shoulder Scaler . black natural . venus maxima l
bygothicbyFinebyScalerbyScalerbyZephyrbyZephyr
660565399419665581

Wow this is a really old dress mesh...the shoes don't go with this at all and the necklace thing you used is not only under textered but doesn't go with this look either as its gray and glittered. The hair I feel is also undertextured as well especially in the purple area. The head/skin/eye combo is beautiful though and I do like the added beauty mark.

There are problems with this look that could use some tweaking and while the dress mesh is rather old (atleast 5 or 6 years old) I think you could possably pull this look off and the outfit's texture isn't really that bad (though it does look like the creator just changed the color of it)....so I am going to ask for a resub rather then say this is unfit for Seduilty.


My complaints: Chocker, shoes, and hair



B+

I don't like the shoes that were selected here. They very spikey, but you don't incorporate spikes anywhere else in the outfit. Something about the skirt just doesn't go with the skirt. I'm also not big on the necklace, which completely lacks texture and is sort of random, here.

I'm not sure if you'll be able to fix this up, but...

B+

I agree fully with Yuki here.

B+

I agree with Yuki

B+

The mesh and texture of the dress is um...interesting
The purple in the hair is kinda random especially because everything else is black + the texture isn't the best
The shoe style just doesn't fit here at all, I have no idea what you would use to replace it though since the dress is odd by itself.
The necklace/choker also feels kinda random and doesn't have the best texture.

B+

agree with yuki and sin

B+

I agree completely with Yuki.

B+

B+
88.33 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Yukikira   : 1436           |
|          B+ : SinHaven   : 1599           |
|          B+ : iMoo       : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful  : Judge          |
|          B+ : kimmipanda : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo    : Judge          |
|          B+ : Purversity : 1843           |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1626.

Resub Granted