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Description: Sorry for the resub errors, I really wasn't getting it and was too hasty. I tried to follow most of the tips from the judges but some things I couldn't say as the blood.. I really couldn't find anything GOOD.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Deja Vu March | Snow
byBrinebyEver
707499

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

 Ralyan BlackYl Eyesbrowns Bl Luma ~ Red Wendy Head
byEvesbyYunoqbyAyoutbyAyout
663447446987

Clothes

Top1 DuplicateShoes

{C} Layerable Bl Love you!Lolita Shoes Bl
byClockworkbyPsicodelicbyMoonwok
590620660

Accessories

GlovesFace PaintActionsActionsSpice GlassesVarious Masque

[M]Bloody HandsPsychoAsus| 70% Hand R90% Shoulder ScaTie Black!E  Real Freckle
byModbySawakobyAsusbyAurora2Sinc33bylH20lbyEmolicious
665664499597587484

Hi ! Welcome to Sedulity This reminds me a lot of the anime "Another" which I would be surprised if that is what inspired it. >D

- I'm going to start from the top to bottom The head/hair/skin combo is cute and I like that. The face blood nor eyepatch were needed though since they both glitch through the nose. The head scaler isn't really needed either.

- The top is good quality but there is a duplicate on it so it's often discouraged to use a one piece with a duplicate. Just remember that future submissions.

- Accessory wise this is fine but you have stuff on not needed like leg scalers and hip scalers and the face light. The only scalers you need are a 70% hand scaler and a 95-90% shoulder scaler. The feet are small in this submission though so I would actually think adding a foot scaler to make them a bit bigger. The blood on the floor isn't really needed since when this submission goes up on the site it will barely be noticeable, taking it off would be good. The layerable blood on the body is fine in most cases but it's not the best quality here.

- The avatar is cute and fits the theme but it's best to use a standing avi in what you actually submit. [www.imvuoutfits.com] On the site avi's that are standing are better to see and sitting ones hide most the outfit.

Taking off the uneeded scalers and actions would greatly clean this up. Also a good tip in submitting things is to include more than one screenie. I hope you resub this though, it's a cute concept.

B+

Choa nailed it on the head, I really don't see anything thats needed to be added except the shoes don't seem to fit, I'm not sure if its the style or the texture or the ruffles on the top of the socks but tehre is something off about them. Choa's right about the blood, the scalers, accessories and verything else...I do like the idea you were going for and can't wait to see it improved.



B+

i love the concept behind this but Bri said everything.

B+

I agree with Bri also.

B+

I'll be updating this one soon! Learned a lot and I'll keep this all in my mind for my next creations.

This has a lot of potential, but the dup on the one piece is much.
The only way typically dups are okay on one pieces is if someone posted it a long time ago, and the two outfits are completely different concepts.

B+

All has been said

B+

Yeah, I agree with everything stated. Really do like the concept though..

B+

This could be a really cool sub if you just listen to the judges above. It's got potential.

B+

B+
88.33 %


5 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Choa          : Judge          |
|          B+ : Yukikira      : 1334           |
|          B+ : Weeaboo       : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1832           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven      : 1475           |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1547.

Resub Granted

Resub posted.

B+
88.33 %


5 judges have voted, the judge average was 88.33 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          B+ : Choa          : Judge          |
|          B+ : Yukikira      : 1439           |
|          B+ : Weeaboo       : Judge          |
|          B+ : Frightful     : Judge          |
|          B+ : EmeraldLagoon : 1824           |
|          B+ : LYDIANN16     : Judge          |
|          B+ : iMoo          : Judge          |
|          B+ : SinHaven      : 1602           |

Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 88.33 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1622.

hey Siesmo, you have to post your resubs in the original thread.