May 28, 2015, 6:45 pm

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Description: Chic/ elegant/ Classic/ Simple
Avatars & Skin
AvatarSkin
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Velvet Avatar
+ goth pale p/u
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Sinderella
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Someone
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Head & Face
HairEyebrows
Eyes
Head
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! Shiori black
!!!**[S] No Eyeb
~ Eyes .B.
Sole' Head w/Las
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Java
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synamonn
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zaii
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lDB
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Clothes
TopTop
Shoes
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Store15Couture
$ Pearlfection
Classics w.Gold
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Fama
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Irrelevant
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Lovers
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785
Accessories
GlovesHats
Custom Shaped
Dainty Hands
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0 Baby Small Han
Inline Hat
m| Leigh brows [
-BlackStilettoNa
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SKYxxxSKY
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FCii
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Moonrise
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Keun
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May 28, 2015, 8:56 pm
I like this a lot! But it seems a bit like it's missing something. The hair glitches a bit so I think a hair that fits the hat better would be nice, I'm not real sure on it's color either. Also since she is a bit bare adding some gold and black accessories would really spruce this up and make the heels match a bit better. personally I think losing the black lips and going any color of the rainbow like red, purple or even blue would be a nice way to give this a bit of zest but that's totally up to you
B+
B+
May 29, 2015, 5:23 am
I actually liked this a lot and the only thing that bothered me honestly was the glitching hair, I think it stands alone without any accessories
A-
A-
May 29, 2015, 5:50 am
I enjoy the look of this. I feel like you're going to tilt the hat up and I'm going to see Audrey Hepburn, back from teh grave. Very classic look.
The glitching is killing me. There are ways to find alternate hairstyles or hats to go with these outfits, where the glitching is more minor, or non-existent. I'd also like to see some more accessorizing. The cut of the shirt is begging you to put a necklace there, maybe something that looks simple in the front (just a chain around the neck) but hangs down the back, as the back is very open.
I also agree with Choa that, though it's not necessary, another lip color would give this a pop of color that would be very refreshing, but I wouldn't dock for that.
Edited because I somehow wrote "A+" instead of "B+" e.e
B+
The glitching is killing me. There are ways to find alternate hairstyles or hats to go with these outfits, where the glitching is more minor, or non-existent. I'd also like to see some more accessorizing. The cut of the shirt is begging you to put a necklace there, maybe something that looks simple in the front (just a chain around the neck) but hangs down the back, as the back is very open.
I also agree with Choa that, though it's not necessary, another lip color would give this a pop of color that would be very refreshing, but I wouldn't dock for that.
Edited because I somehow wrote "A+" instead of "B+" e.e
B+
May 29, 2015, 10:30 am
Omgggg this is totally my bag. I love black on black on black, with some black on the side and black for extras. Hat's a bit weird, don't dig the hair texture (too light) but tbh the mesh inserts on the skirt totally makes up for it.
A
A
May 29, 2015, 10:47 am
I think my only complaint here is the lack of accessories; a necklace would be a nice touch.
But otherwise, I think this was well put together.
A-
But otherwise, I think this was well put together.
A-
May 29, 2015, 11:11 am
I actually agree with SinHaven. The glitch is a bit too noticable, and she's really bare.
B+
B+
May 29, 2015, 4:30 pm
Agred with Sin and Choa
Im not really sure of the use of the hat on this at all
The top and skirt is great
B+
Im not really sure of the use of the hat on this at all
The top and skirt is great
B+
May 29, 2015, 8:10 pm

B+
89.29 %
4 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.17 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| B+ : Choa       : Judge | | A- : MorbidAngst : 1116 | | B+ : SinHaven   : 1475 | | A : awkward    : 1    | | A- : iMoo       : Judge | | B+ : Frightful  : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16  : Judge |
Note: 3 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.77 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 864.