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Description: Victorian










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Skylar Avatar! Hoshi Lash LA 
bySinderellabyLee
3899554

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

(   ) Crimson Rsab[mm] Thick Black Realism >> | Bl| Season head
byFrightfulbymiamewbyEverbyStir
665554499997

Clothes

TopShoes

Mortis GownTD. Black High
byMeridhianbyTade
739499

Accessories

HatsUmbrellasActionsActionsNecklacesForehead Jewel

*c| Raven's Feat[V1] Black UmbreHand Scaler 70%[Night] Shoulder!S PVC Cross NecKerli Jewels
byCeresbyVaneIvIbyScalerbyNightbySinfullybyMachine
866880399598575550

Dainty Hands

-BlackStilettoNa
byKeun
526

This is really cute - I like it. I'm not the biggest fan of the dress that you selected - the texturing isn't the best. But it's not so bad that I'm going to gripe too much about it.

I'd like to see something on her wrist, but that's pretty minor.

Generally good.

A-

I agree with Sin on the dress texture, but I am also curious about the blood on it, I don't really see anything that ties it in or explains why there is blood on her dress. The umbrella also does not have the best texture and the bindi was unneeded. The necklace was also not needed because it is so hard to see against the dress..(Took me forever to realize there even was a necklace, lol). The shoes also have no texture and don't really match the dress. Im going to ask for a resub, I would really like to see a better textured umbrella and something to tye the blood in. I really like the concept but this could use a few tweaks...



B+

I agree with Yuki 110%
Edit: Lowering grade to help grade a bit faster.

B

i agree with yuki too, the bindi i just out of place all together. as the necklace, maybe try a silver one if you really want a necklace? i dont really think its needed since theres a lot going on with the dress. i also dont really find her face to fit the dress all that much? i feel like she should look more grown up or sexy or mysterious ya know???

B+

Agreed with the above comments. I like the hair though i think that was a nice and unique touch

B+

I agree with everyone above.
I actually think you don't need the feathers and that umbrella, though that's just my personal opinion.

B+

If you added a description it would help the judges with their grades so we get a better understanding why you put certain products in a piece or if you just threw it together.

-The texture is alright but I won't bark about that.
-The bindi is really out of place.
-I would have loved to see paler skin either with nude lip or black lips
-I'm not really sure about the hair style and color here, it feels a bit too grungy especially w/ the texture of the bang's ends would've done a traditional victorian hair style w/ a natural colors
-Necklace isn't needed
-Try a "loli" umbrella they have more victorian feel than a modern day umbrella

B+

B+
88.12 %


3 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.22 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : SinHaven     : 1599           |
|          B+ : Yukikira     : 1436           |
|          B  : iMoo         : Judge          |
|          B+ : Weeaboo      : Judge          |
|          B+ : Serenaxrayne : 1545           |
|          B+ : Purversity   : 1843           |
|          B+ : kimmipanda   : Judge          |

Note: 4 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.16 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1606.

Resub Granted