June 15, 2015, 8:04 am
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Description: Risque but semi classy in a way. I really tried looking for a nice shade of red lipstick to go with this dress even an add on so I apologize for that.
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June 15, 2015, 9:54 am
Diff skin w/o tats, lose the necklace or find a nice silver choker or drop down earrings. Would like something to stand out more, everything is pretty average.
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June 15, 2015, 10:19 am
The body shape vs the head is not my fave, would have went for something more mature, and more bitchy brows. Usually the angrier the look the more seductive. I have to agree with that skin, the tattoo sticking out just kinda trashes the class of the look. The jewellery is bland, would have used a longer earring and a necklace tighter to the neckline like recommended by Nerves. I am not too sure about the way the nails just match the dress like that either, maybe a french tip or plain old white? They are kinda outdated. This is more of a personal thing and not a big deal, but I would have went for longer hair possibly in an updo, and the Luna or Venus avatar by Sinderella, the poses are more suited and are much more "Seductive Classy" like described.
Overall fix the jewellery, change the skin, and switch up the avatar a bit. This will give it the classy seductive look it needs. For me, these little things really bring down the outfit quality and make it quite boring. Maybe give it a retry in a re-submission? The little things should not be too much to change, and make the potential of the dress really pop on the website. I do love how you got all of those colours to match (I am also colour blind and this could very well be bright red and I am seeing it as kinda pink Idunno, looks like a unique unmatchable colour to me), I would have found it a struggle and would have given up; I am quite particular about it.
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Overall fix the jewellery, change the skin, and switch up the avatar a bit. This will give it the classy seductive look it needs. For me, these little things really bring down the outfit quality and make it quite boring. Maybe give it a retry in a re-submission? The little things should not be too much to change, and make the potential of the dress really pop on the website. I do love how you got all of those colours to match (I am also colour blind and this could very well be bright red and I am seeing it as kinda pink Idunno, looks like a unique unmatchable colour to me), I would have found it a struggle and would have given up; I am quite particular about it.
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June 15, 2015, 11:27 am
I don't know if you know this, but CheSav makes two of the same skin tone usually, one with tattoos and piercings (T/P), and one without.
If you want this exact skin, but without the tattoo and bellybutton piercing: click.
However, I suggest you find one that doesn't have the blue eye shadow, as it matches nothing here.
I know a few of CheSav skins have that kind of red lips, so.
I agree with Nerves. Drop down earrings would look lovely here, but if you have long earrings, I suggest you stay away from any necklaces and try a ring.
I personally don't like the eyes you have on. They look like they'd belong to a young kid, not a seductive woman.
I suggest a hazel, something darker and less sparkly.
I also agree that the head takes away from this. Try kloudust. Almost all heads are derived from kloudust, so you'll find a lot more than just what's most popular. I really love the Goldie head from kloudust, when doing provocative.
The brows are so thin, and high, it gives her a childish gleeful look, that I'm not sure you want to have. Just changing the brows to some of Zephyrs might help.
Having red nails on a red dress just doesn't work for me. It blends and really, overall, clashes. I agree, a French manicure would probably work best.
Personally, I say don't change the avatar. It's fine now. You don't need a bunch of poses. Just make the small changes suggested, and you're good to go.
Really great job with the color-coordination.
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June 15, 2015, 8:15 pm
June 15, 2015, 9:31 pm
i'm with nerves and auca too, i like everything but the leg tattoo~
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June 16, 2015, 4:59 am
The tattoo spoke originality and if i wanted a drop down earring i would of added it.
June 16, 2015, 8:53 am
The judges are just trying to offer advice, there is no need to take it personally.
I'm actually fine with the the tattoo but I agree with everything said. The brows are too thin and I don't think the necklace was needed. Possibly doing an updo and dangly earrings would really class this up.
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I'm actually fine with the the tattoo but I agree with everything said. The brows are too thin and I don't think the necklace was needed. Possibly doing an updo and dangly earrings would really class this up.
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June 18, 2015, 6:30 am
B+
89.47 %
4 judges have voted, the judge average was 89.17 % ( B+ )
Grading Breakdown:
| A- : Nerves    : 1724 | | B+ : Ouijah    : 1573 | | B+ : Purversity : 1795 | | B+ : iMoo      : Judge | | B+ : LYDIANN16 : Judge | | A- : Aucalio   : 1430 | | A- : Weeaboo   : Judge | | B+ : Choa      : Judge |
Note: 4 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 89.95 % ( B+ ) with an average rating weight of 1631.
August 15, 2015, 11:41 am
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Description: Changed the eyes, accessories, head and skin. Didn't realize the second pose had a cut off sorry about that
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August 15, 2015, 2:00 pm
It's not a bad improvement, though I wish you had taken the judges' advice about opting for an updo to go along with those dangly earrings. As is, they're getting lost in the hair.
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August 15, 2015, 3:28 pm
While this is an improvement, I agree that you should gone with an updo. You should really learn to listen judges critiques in resubs.
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