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Description: just a spin off of a personal outfit of mine that i wanted to share. i haven't been able to post in a while and since i was super inspired by my outfit i wanted to share this version.










Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Skylar Avatar[ Natural Light 
bySinderellabyCindyy
3899558

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyesHead

P| Amity Pacific[H] No Eyebrows!A| White eyes 3Scarla Head Lash
byPulpbyHannah1120byAimybySinHaven
663355554987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

Caroline TopV* Morgana.Skirt Rouge Bettie He
byFatalInstinctbyVeynbyDexy
718598664

Accessories

ActionsActionsActionsDainty HandsNecklacesCustom Shaped 

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder ScalerHIP Scaler|120%Claw NailsV' +Trader Neckl. black natural 
byScalerbyScalerbyxSTYLIZTICxbyLoversbyVkeibyZephyr
399598488774669665

!!Music!!Face PaintFace PaintFacial Jewelry

Horns Chain Ring���Scarla Lucy MU ���Scarla Pitch Ma[X] Septum B | S
byQukbySinHavenbySinHavenbyXpicy
641636691444

I think this is nice but I'm kind of finding the horns and eyes to be a bit excessive and off theme. I like how they look personally but marketing I think they're too personal and should be kept for your avi and find things that still make the avi look near the same because I wouldn't want people to look like me so I wouldn't submit things I wear or avi's for myself. lol Other than all that I really like the colour co-ordination, it's very nice especially the skirt and shoes.

A-

Agreed. I feel the same about personal touches. On your avi they're dope but they usually get downgraded on Sedulity. The horns are a bit excessive if we're talking about what fits the site but I like how they look nonetheless.

A-

This is an interesting look and I don't think it was really executed well. The top looks really random here, I don't feel like it really goes. I feel like maybe some type of corset would pull this look off more. I like the skirt and the shoes, but the hip scaler isn't really a good idea when it's this big. It's making your avi unproportional. Her legs are really stretched out and it's not flattering, the biggest you can really go with a hip scaler is 110% without it stretching your avi.. The horns are a bit excessive, I think smaller ones would have worked better here. The hair is also a bit random looking, I don't feel like it really goes here. Something darker, with more body would look better. I'm not really a fan of these eyes, there isn't much texturing to them and they just seem like white blobs me. The makeup is a bit excessive for this type of casual look, but if you switch out tops for something different, then the makeup will go better.

B

I actually have no complaints, whatsoever.

A

110% hip scalers do make the legs larger/longer, lol. And I've used these eyes in a few submissions and never heard that complaint. They're some of the better textured white eyes I've seen in the catty.
But all in all, I agree with what Fright said, and that this still feels personal with the horns and eyes.
It has a lot of potential, but a few tweaks would do you good.

B+

this outfit is all over the place for me, i dont find any of the pieces to really match one another? if you had to change one thing i guess i would say the top, but the shoes make your feet look fat

the horns seem kind of random to me, as the eyes, cause it kind of looks like you were going for like a demon look but i just dont feel that with the rest of the outfit

the blue hair coloring is out of place too, it just doesnt really have a place with a mostly red outfit

tbh idk if theres much saving this because i do find 2 out of 3 of the pieces to be an unlikely pair

B

B+
89.03 %


4 judges have voted, the judge average was 87.5 % ( B+ )

Grading Breakdown:

|          A- : Nerves     : 1724           |
|          A- : Ajak       : Judge          |
|          B  : Frightful  : Judge          |
|          A  : Purversity : 1795           |
|          B+ : iMoo       : Judge          |
|          B  : Weeaboo    : Judge          |

Note: 2 member reviews were taken into account;
Their weighted grade was 93.37 % ( A ) with an average rating weight of 1760.

Resub Granted

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Description: I changed the top, and removed the horns and waist scaler.
I changed the eyes but wanted to keep them white.
I changed the hair color but wanted to keep the style.








Avatars & Skin

AvatarSkin

Skylar Avatar[ Natural Light 
bySinderellabyCindyy
3899558

Head & Face

HairEyebrowsEyebrowsEyesHead

P| Amity Black[H] No Eyebrows!. black natural mm. '15 Eyes PolScarla Head Lash
byPulpbyHannah1120byZephyrbyMissMayabySinHaven
663355665499987

Clothes

TopBottomShoes

R black crop topV* Morgana.Skirt Rouge Bettie He
byReunionbyVeynbyDexy
499598664

Accessories

ScalerScalerDainty HandsNecklacesFace PaintFace Paint

Hand Scaler 70%Shoulder ScalerClaw NailsV' +Trader Neckl�Scarla Lucy MU �Scarla Pitch Ma
byScalerbyScalerbyLoversbyVkeibySinHavenbySinHaven
399598774669636691

Facial Jewelry

[X] Septum B | S
byXpicy
444

This was actually revamped during the last revamp theme so not really sure how to go about grading this.

i didn't even know it was :/

probably should've looked more before i resubmitted xD

I messaged Choa about it so we'll just have to see what she says

Just judge it as is. Since there are no dupes and you had no idea I don't think it'd be right to let it fail. xD

Well I mean there are distinct differences between submissions. If I remember correctly, Fright changed up the clothing a bit and gave her more of a demonic look. :q I'd say go on and grade it as is...

This is a lot better than the original. The white eyes don't feel so random either because I get a sort of goth vibe from this, and contacts are popular in that style. A bracelet wouldn't hurt though.

A

And depending on what Choa says, I guess my grade could be ignored. :u Lmao.

Thank you for clearing that up Choa

Way better than the original

A